图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ "the" trước "library". Bạn cũng nên chia câu thành các câu ngắn hơn để rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I often go to the library on weekends when I have free time after a hard working week. I usually look for books about physiology because I have a great interest in this subject.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thiếu mạo từ và động từ chia sai. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên hoàn chỉnh và tránh bỏ dở câu. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và mô tả chi tiết hơn về hoạt động của bạn.

示例: First, I find the books I need on the subjects I want to learn about. Then, I find a quiet corner where I can be alone and enjoy reading peacefully.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng cách và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I lived in a small town that did not have a public library. However, my school had one, so I usually went to the library during school time.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi trước rồi mới nói về bản thân. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in Vietnam, my friends and I spent a lot of time in the library to gain knowledge. When I was a child, TV and the Internet were not as developed as they are today.

× I go to library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to library to find some book about Physiology because I have a big love with this kind of book.

✓ I go to the library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to the library to find some books about Physiology because I have a big love for this kind of book.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'some book' should be plural 'some books' to match the context of multiple items, and 'have a big love with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a big love for'.

× I go to library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to library to find some book about Physiology because I have a big love with this kind of book.

✓ I go to the library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to the library to find some books about Physiology because I have a big love for this kind of book.

The noun 'book' should be plural 'books' because the speaker is likely referring to multiple books about Physiology, not just one.

× I go to library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to library to find some book about Physiology because I have a big love with this kind of book.

✓ I go to the library at the weekend when I have free time after a hard working week and I go to the library to find some books about Physiology because I have a big love for this kind of book.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'love' in this context; the correct preposition is 'for'.

× First step I will find the book I want about the subjects that I have demand to find information. Then I will come to a corner that have only me with my space and I enjoy in the.

✓ First, I will find the book I want about the subjects that I need to find information on. Then I will go to a corner that has only me with my space and I enjoy being there.

The phrase 'have demand to find information' is incorrect; it should be 'need to find information on'. Also, 'come to a corner that have only me' should be 'go to a corner that has only me'. The phrase 'I enjoy in the' is incomplete and should be 'I enjoy being there'.

× Then I will come to a corner that have only me with my space and I enjoy in the.

✓ Then I will go to a corner that has only me with my space and I enjoy being there.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'corner'; it should be 'has'.

× I live in a small town so it's not have a Public Library, but my school have so I usually can't went to library during the time I at school after.

✓ I lived in a small town so it didn't have a Public Library, but my school did, so I usually couldn't go to the library during the time I was at school.

The sentence refers to past time, so verbs should be in past tense: 'live' to 'lived', 'it's not have' to 'it didn't have', 'have' to 'did', 'can't went' to 'couldn't go', and 'I at school after' to 'I was at school'.

× I live in a small town so it's not have a Public Library, but my school have so I usually can't went to library during the time I at school after.

✓ I lived in a small town so it didn't have a Public Library, but my school did, so I usually couldn't go to the library during the time I was at school.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific place.

× I don't know. I come from Vietnam and around me, my friend with me, we spend so much time in the library to gain knowledge, because when I was a child, TV and Internet have not developed as hard as today.

✓ I don't know. I come from Vietnam and around me, my friends and I spend so much time in the library to gain knowledge, because when I was a child, TV and the Internet had not developed as much as today.

The verb 'spend' should be present tense here as it refers to habitual action. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Have not developed' should be past perfect 'had not developed' to refer to a past state before now. 'As hard as' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as much as'. Also, 'Internet' usually takes the definite article 'the'.

× I don't know. I come from Vietnam and around me, my friend with me, we spend so much time in the library to gain knowledge, because when I was a child, TV and Internet have not developed as hard as today.

✓ I don't know. I come from Vietnam and around me, my friends and I spend so much time in the library to gain knowledge, because when I was a child, TV and the Internet had not developed as much as today.

The phrase 'my friend with me' is incorrect; it should be 'my friends and I' to correctly include the speaker and friends as subjects.