图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答时态混乱，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态，并简洁明了地回答问题，例如用一般现在时描述现在的习惯。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library. I usually visit it after school to study or read books.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和句型，明确说明在图书馆的活动，并用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: I usually read books in the library. Also, I go there a week before my midterm exams to prepare.

建议: 时态和主谓一致错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用过去时态描述过去的习惯，并注意语法正确。

示例: Yes, I went to the library when I was a kid. I often visited it during summer vacation because it was cool inside with air conditioning.

建议: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用完整句子表达观点，避免模糊和重复。

示例: Not many Chinese kids go to the library often. In my experience, only a few children visit regularly.

× I usually go to the libraries when I was a student.

✓ I usually went to the libraries when I was a student.

这里描述的是过去的习惯动作，应该使用过去时态。'usually'可以和过去时连用表示过去经常发生的事情。

× I will go to libraries every days after school.

✓ I went to the library every day after school.

'libraries'复数形式不符合语境，通常指固定的一个图书馆；'every days'错误，'every'后面应接单数名词'day'。另外，时态应与上下文一致，使用过去时。

× I usually reading a book at the library and then when upcoming the medium test I will go to library before a medium test a week.

✓ I usually read a book at the library, and then when the midterm test is coming, I will go to the library a week before the midterm test.

'usually'后应接动词原形'read'，而非动名词'reading'。'upcoming'用法不当，应改为'when the midterm test is coming'。'go to library'缺少冠词'the'。

× Yes I did when I were kids.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a kid.

'were'用于复数，主语是单数'I'，应使用'was'。'kids'复数不符合语境，应该用单数'kid'。

× I usually go to libraries on summer vacation because the library have a air conditioner so I will stay in library all days.

✓ I usually go to the library on summer vacation because the library has an air conditioner, so I stay in the library all day.

'libraries'复数不符合语境，改为单数'the library'。'have'应与单数主语'the library'一致，改为'has'。'a air conditioner'冠词错误，'air conditioner'以元音音素开头，应使用'an'。'all days'表达不准确，改为'all day'表示整天。

× Not really, I often go to the library, saw the Chinese kids.

✓ Not really, I often go to the library and see Chinese kids.

句子缺少连词'and'连接两个动作，'saw'时态不对，应与现在时态'go'保持一致，改为'see'。

× Or maybe it's more kids, but not just only Chinese.

✓ Or maybe there are more kids, but not only Chinese kids.

'it's more kids'表达不准确，应使用'there are more kids'。'just only'重复，简化为'only'。