图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat natural but a bit disorganized and contains some grammar mistakes. Try to make your response more coherent by using linking words and complete sentences. Also, avoid short incomplete sentences like 'The book.' Instead, explain why you like the environment. For example, you can say: 'I often go to the library because it is quiet and helps me concentrate. Also, seeing others study hard motivates me to keep going.'

示例: I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can focus better. Moreover, seeing other people studying hard encourages me to stay motivated in my own studies.

建议: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammar errors. Try to answer directly what you usually do in the library, then add supporting details with linking words. For example, start with 'I usually study and borrow books in the library because...' Also, avoid repeating ideas and keep sentences complete.

示例: I usually study and borrow books in the library because it is cheaper than buying them. Also, the quiet environment helps me concentrate better on my studies.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and repetitive. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect sentences. For example, start with 'Yes, I did. It is a family tradition because my parents, who are doctors, also studied there.' Then explain how they influenced you.

示例: Yes, I did. Going to the library is a family tradition because my parents, who are doctors, used to study and borrow books there. They taught me from a young age to focus and concentrate on my studies in the library.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Try to answer directly and clearly. Use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, say 'It depends on the family rather than nationality because...' Also, avoid confusing phrases like 'my parents up to them'.

示例: It depends on the family rather than nationality. In my family, my parents and grandparents encouraged me to go to the library from a young age, so I developed the habit early.

× I feel I can focus more in a quiet place and watching people trying to focus and study hard like me encourage me to keep going on my studies.

✓ I feel I can focus more in a quiet place and watching people trying to focus and study hard like me encourages me to keep going on my studies.

The verb 'encourage' should be in the third person singular form 'encourages' to agree with the singular subject 'watching people trying to focus and study hard like me'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to verb form after -ing phrases.

× Also I feel the light, the colors. The book.

✓ Also, I feel the light, the colors, and the books.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper conjunctions and plural agreement. Adding 'and' and making 'book' plural improves sentence structure and clarity.

× My parents teach me to balance between my study and my life.

✓ My parents taught me to balance between my study and my life.

Since the action happened in the past, the verb 'teach' should be in the past tense 'taught' to match the time frame.

× So sometimes I go for study there and borrowing a book because it's cheaper than buying them.

✓ So sometimes I go to study there and borrow a book because it's cheaper than buying them.

The phrase 'go for study' is incorrect; it should be 'go to study'. Also, 'borrowing' should be 'borrow' to maintain parallel verb forms after 'go to study'.

× So also for the studies is very good.

✓ So, it is also very good for studying.

The original sentence lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'it is' and rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Actually going to the library is very traditional thing in our family because my parents are doctors so they used to go to study there and borrow our books because it's cheaper.

✓ Actually, going to the library is a very traditional thing in our family because my parents are doctors, so they used to go to study there and borrow books because it's cheaper.

Added article 'a' before 'very traditional thing' and removed 'our' before 'books' for naturalness. Also added commas for clarity.

× So they teach me when I was a kid until now to go and focus and concentrate about my studies.

✓ So they have taught me since I was a kid until now to go and focus and concentrate on my studies.

The verb 'teach' should be in present perfect 'have taught' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Also, 'concentrate about' should be 'concentrate on' (see next correction).

× So they teach me when I was a kid until now to go and focus and concentrate about my studies.

✓ So they have taught me since I was a kid until now to go and focus and concentrate on my studies.

The correct preposition with 'concentrate' is 'on', not 'about'. This is a common preposition error.

× Actually is depend on the person and how they raised up their children because my parents up to them to go to the liberty from the kids like their grandmother and grandfather.

✓ Actually, it depends on the person and how they raise their children because my parents took them to the library from when they were kids, like their grandmother and grandfather.

The sentence lacked the subject 'it' and had incorrect verb forms 'is depend' and 'raised up'. Corrected to 'it depends' and 'raise'. Also corrected 'liberty' to 'library' and rephrased for clarity.

× Actually is depend on the person and how they raised up their children because my parents up to them to go to the liberty from the kids like their grandmother and grandfather.

✓ Actually, it depends on the person and how they raise their children because my parents took them to the library from when they were kids, like their grandmother and grandfather.

Corrected preposition usage: 'depend on' is correct, but 'raised up' is incorrect; 'raise' is the correct verb. Also, 'up to them to go' is incorrect; 'took them to' is appropriate.

× So they teach me to go to the library with them.

✓ So they taught me to go to the library with them.

Verb tense corrected to past tense 'taught' to match the context. Pronoun usage is correct.

× So it's not depend on the nationality of the children.

✓ So it doesn't depend on the nationality of the children.

The phrase 'it's not depend' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it doesn't depend' to express negation with the verb 'depend'.