图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时时态使用不准确，应该保持时态一致，且表达应更自然流畅。建议使用简单明了的句子，避免重复。

示例: I often went to the library when I was in high school because I needed to prepare for exams and review my lessons.

建议: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议先直接回答问题，再用具体细节支持，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

示例: People usually go to the library to borrow books or study. Children sometimes play there, but I mainly use the library to study for school tests and exams.

建议: 时态错误和表达不完整，句子结构不清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达，并补充具体细节。

示例: Yes, I went to the library often as a child because the basement had many toys and picture books, which I really enjoyed.

建议: 回答较为完整且有逻辑，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意细节的准确性。

示例: Yes, Chinese children used to visit libraries more often than previous generations. However, nowadays, many prefer reading books online or using e-books because it is more convenient and accessible, so fewer children visit libraries frequently.

× I often go to the library when I was 16 or about like high school 'cause I'm preparing for some exam or for some test.

✓ I often went to the library when I was 16 or in high school because I was preparing for some exam or test.

句子中描述的是过去的情况，应该使用过去时态。'go' 应改为过去式 'went'，'I'm preparing' 应改为过去进行时 'I was preparing'。

× So I go to library for study and do some reviews there.

✓ So I go to the library to study and do some reviews there.

'go to library' 缺少定冠词 'the'，'for study' 应改为 'to study'，因为表示目的时用不定式。

× Many people in go to library for borrowing the books or for study or like the children go to the library for playing around like this and I go to library for studying for schools test or exam.

✓ Many people go to the library to borrow books or to study, and children go to the library to play around like this. I go to the library to study for school tests or exams.

'in go to library' 结构错误，应去掉 'in'。'go to library' 缺少定冠词 'the'。'for borrowing' 和 'for study' 应改为不定式 'to borrow' 和 'to study'。'schools test' 应为复数所有格 'school tests'。

× Yes, of course I did went to the library when I was a kid cause in our country the basement part of the library has many toys and something like the books with the painting or something interesting in it.

✓ Yes, of course I did go to the library when I was a kid because in our country the basement part of the library has many toys and things like books with paintings or something interesting in it.

助动词 'did' 后面动词应为原形，'did went' 应改为 'did go'。'cause' 应改为正式的 'because'。'something like the books with the painting' 结构不清，应改为 'things like books with paintings'。

× So I very like to go to the library when I was.

✓ So I really liked to go to the library when I was a child.

'I very like' 结构错误，应为 'I really liked'。句子缺少完整时间状语，补充 'when I was a child'。

× Yes, I believe children in China used to visit libraries more often than previous generations.

✓ Yes, I believe children in China visit libraries more often than previous generations did.

句子中 'used to' 表示过去习惯，和 'believe' 现在时不搭配，应改为现在时 'visit'，并在比较对象后加 'did' 表示过去。

× Therefore, I don't think that many children go to the library as frequent as before.

✓ Therefore, I don't think that many children go to the library as frequently as before.

'frequent' 是形容词，修饰动词应使用副词 'frequently'。