图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by stating your preference clearly once and then giving a specific reason. Also, use correct article usage ('the library') and plural forms ('paper-based books').

示例: I don't go to the library very often because I prefer using online books, which are more convenient and accessible for me.

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and contains hesitations and repetitions. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will help convey your message more effectively.

示例: The library I used to visit wasn't very convenient for reading because it only allowed borrowing books to take home, so there were no comfortable spaces to read on-site.

建议: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetitions. Use correct grammar such as 'didn't use to' instead of 'didn't used to'. Provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details and use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: No, I didn't use to go to the library as a child because I found it boring. Instead, I preferred playing video games and other games with my friends.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid filler words and repetitions. Use correct plural forms and articles. Provide a clear opinion with supporting details and use linking words to improve coherence.

示例: I'm not Chinese, so I'm not sure about their habits. However, when I was a child, we rarely went to the library because most kids found it boring and preferred playing with friends.

× I don't go to library very often, I prefer to use online books rather than a paper based books because lately in my life I started preferring online books because it's really convenient and useful for my life.

✓ I don't go to the library very often, I prefer to use online books rather than paper-based books because lately in my life I started preferring online books because it's really convenient and useful for my life.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. Also, 'a paper based books' is incorrect because 'books' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'; it should be 'paper-based books'. Articles must agree with the noun number and specificity.

× At the library that I once used to go is not really convenient to look and read the books there as I have imagined a while ago.

✓ The library that I once used to go to is not really convenient to look at and read the books there as I had imagined a while ago.

The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' after 'used to go'. Also, 'look and read' should be 'look at and read' for correct verb-preposition usage. The tense 'have imagined' should be past perfect 'had imagined' to match the past context.

× Uh, in my library you could you could also you could only take the book and take it with you to home and nothing else.

✓ Uh, in my library you could only take the book and take it home and nothing else.

The phrase 'take it with you to home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'home' without 'to'. Also, the repetition 'you could you could you could' is redundant and should be simplified.

× Uh, no, I didn't used to go to the library when I was a kid because I, I used to find this kind of activities quite boring.

✓ Uh, no, I didn't use to go to the library when I was a kid because I used to find these kinds of activities quite boring.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb 'use' should be used, not 'used'. Also, 'this kind of activities' is incorrect; it should be 'these kinds of activities' to agree in number.

× Uh, in contrary, I used to prefer uh, activities like video games or playing a game because I was a kid.

✓ Uh, on the contrary, I used to prefer activities like video games or playing games because I was a kid.

'In contrary' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the contrary'. Also, 'playing a game' is better as 'playing games' to match the plural form used with 'activities'.

× I am not a Chinese so I'm not sure if they go to the library, but as a as a kid I can confirm that we don't go to library very often.

✓ I am not Chinese so I'm not sure if they go to the library, but as a kid I can confirm that we don't go to the library very often.

The phrase 'not a Chinese' is incorrect; 'Chinese' is used as an adjective or uncountable noun here without 'a'. Also, 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The repeated 'as a as a kid' should be simplified to 'as a kid'.

× Big as a kids find this uh these kind of activities quite boring and we rather play with our friends.

✓ Big kids find these kinds of activities quite boring and we would rather play with our friends.

'Big as a kids' is incorrect; it should be 'Big kids' or 'As big kids'. 'These kind of activities' should be 'these kinds of activities' to agree in number. Also, 'we rather play' should be 'we would rather play' for correct modal verb usage.