图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apnar answer ta onek boro na, kintu kichu redundancy ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke aro natural ar fluent korte, ar kichu linking words use korun jate answer ta logical hoy.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because it is convenient; the books I need are always available there. Moreover, the library provides a calm and soothing environment, which helps me concentrate better on my studies.

建议: Apnar answer incomplete mone hocche, ar kichu sentence structure o clear na. Apni chesta korun proshner uttor direct dite, ar supporting details clear ar complete korte. Linking words use korle answer ta aro bhalo hobe.

示例: I usually go to the library to complete my assignments because I find it difficult to concentrate at home. Since home is a place for relaxation, I prefer the quiet environment of the library to focus on my studies.

建议: Apnar answer e kichu repetition ache, ar kichu sentence structure o confusing. Apni chesta korun simple ar clear sentence use korte, ar avoid korun repetition. Supporting details ke aro specific ar logical korte hobe.

示例: No, I did not go to the library when I was a child because the roads were busy and my parents were both working. Therefore, they did not have time to take me there, and I was too young to go alone.

建议: Apni proshner uttor e onek uncertain mone hocchen. Apni chesta korun confident ar direct uttor dite. Supporting details ke aro specific ar relevant korte hobe. Linking words use korle answer ta aro fluent hobe.

示例: I am not very sure about Chinese children, but I believe that since China is a progressive country, many children probably visit libraries. Also, libraries should have good facilities to encourage children to read more.

× Yes, I do like to study in library because it's quite convenient for me as the books are available and it's it offers a calm and soothing place to learn things.

✓ Yes, I do like to study in the library because it's quite convenient for me as the books are available and it offers a calm and soothing place to learn things.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both the speaker and listener. Also, the phrase 'it's it offers' contains a repetition error; 'it offers' is correct.

× I visit the library because of two reasons. First one is to complete my assignments that are provided in the class because I don't like to do things in my home. I believe home is a place for comfort, so I tend to finish my homework in the library and also when.

✓ I visit the library for two reasons. The first is to complete my assignments given in class because I don't like to do things at home. I believe home is a place for comfort, so I tend to finish my homework in the library.

The phrase 'because of two reasons' is incorrect; 'for two reasons' is correct. 'First one is' should be 'The first is'. 'Provided in the class' is better as 'given in class'. 'Do things in my home' should be 'do things at home'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and also when', which is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.

× No, I don't think I went to libraries in my childhood because our roads are quite busy and my parents are both working, so then they don't get the time. They didn't get the time to take me to the library and as I am a child back then, I was a child back then, so I can't do it.

✓ No, I don't think I went to libraries in my childhood because our roads were quite busy and my parents were both working, so they didn't have the time. They didn't take me to the library and as I was a child back then, I couldn't do it.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'Roads are' should be 'roads were' to match past context. 'They don't get the time' should be 'they didn't have the time'. 'As I am a child back then' should be 'as I was a child back then'. 'I can't do it' should be 'I couldn't do it' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I don't have a good good knowledge about Chinese, Chinese children or kids, but I think as a progressive country they should send their children to libraries and other libraries should have the proper arrangements to encourage children to come.

✓ I don't have good knowledge about Chinese children or kids, but I think as a progressive country, they should send their children to libraries, and libraries should have proper arrangements to encourage children to come.

The phrase 'a good good knowledge' is incorrect; 'good knowledge' is sufficient. The repetition 'Chinese, Chinese children' is redundant. 'The proper arrangements' can be simplified to 'proper arrangements'. Also, adding commas improves sentence clarity.