图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ. Bạn nên tránh dùng các cụm từ như "Not to mention" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này và nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có thể rút gọn để tự nhiên hơn.

示例: No, I haven't been going to the library recently because I am busy working as an English lecturer. Moreover, I can easily find the materials I need online, which is more convenient for me.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đầy đủ và có sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý, tuy nhiên câu trả lời có thể được làm rõ hơn bằng cách sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ như "libraries" nhiều lần. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ đồng nghĩa và câu ngắn gọn hơn để tự nhiên hơn.

示例: When I visit the library, I usually look for the books I need. Additionally, I find it a quiet place where I can concentrate on my work without distractions, which is very helpful.

建议: Câu trả lời có một số lỗi về ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như "went to the reading place or not" không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library when I was at university. It was a great place to focus on my studies and find all the materials I needed. I also went there to escape from noisy environments.

建议: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu trả lời có thể được cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ như "stay at home" nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ phù hợp hơn như "Chinese children" thay vì "Chinese kids" để trang trọng hơn trong bài thi.

示例: Nowadays, with the rise of digital technology, I think most Chinese children don't often visit libraries because they can easily access information online from home, which is more convenient for them.

× No, I do not go to the library recently because I am working as a lecturer of English and I do not have free time to go to the library.

✓ No, I have not been going to the library recently because I am working as a lecturer of English and I do not have free time to go to the library.

The adverb 'recently' indicates a time period up to now, so the present perfect tense 'have not been going' is more appropriate than simple present 'do not go' to express an action that has been ongoing or repeated in the recent past.

× Not to mention that I can find any materials I need from online resources, so I think it could be more convenient for me to stay at home.

✓ Not to mention that I can find any materials I need on online resources, so I think it could be more convenient for me to stay at home.

The correct preposition to use with 'online resources' is 'on' rather than 'from' because materials are accessed on a platform or website.

× Of course, when I go to the libraries, I will definitely find the books I need, and sometimes I can stay in the libraries and focus on what I'm working for without any distractions.

✓ Of course, when I go to the library, I will definitely find the books I need, and sometimes I can stay in the library and focus on what I'm working on without any distractions.

The word 'library' is usually singular when referring to the general place; also, the phrase 'focus on what I'm working for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'focus on what I'm working on' because 'focus on' requires the preposition 'on'.

× focus on what I'm working for without any distractions

✓ focus on what I'm working on without any distractions

The verb 'work' is followed by the preposition 'on' when indicating the object or task one is engaged with.

× So I would say I went to the reading place or not to get away from the busy and noisy.

✓ So I would say I went to the reading place to get away from the busy and noisy environment.

The phrase 'or not' is unnecessary and confusing here; also, 'busy and noisy' needs a noun to complete the phrase, such as 'environment'. The sentence is corrected to clarify the purpose and complete the meaning.

× Nowadays, with the rise of digital technologies, I realize that most of Chinese kids do not go to the library because they can stay at home and find everything they need from the Internet.

✓ Nowadays, with the rise of digital technologies, I realize that most Chinese kids do not go to the library because they can stay at home and find everything they need on the Internet.

The phrase 'most of Chinese kids' is incorrect; it should be 'most Chinese kids' without 'of'. Also, the preposition with 'Internet' is 'on' not 'from'.

× find everything they need from the Internet

✓ find everything they need on the Internet

The correct preposition to use with 'Internet' is 'on' because information is accessed on the Internet, not from it.

× So it would be more beneficial for them to stay at home and find the thing they want.

✓ So it would be more beneficial for them to stay at home and find the things they want.

The phrase 'the thing they want' is too singular and general; 'things' is more appropriate to refer to multiple items that children might want to find.