图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

示例: I don't often go to the library nowadays because I can easily find information on my phone. However, when I was a child, I used to visit the library frequently since I didn't have a phone and it was my main source of entertainment.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并避免口语化的表达。

示例: I am a university student, and since our dormitory doesn't have air conditioning, I often go to the library to stay cool during hot summer days. It helps me concentrate better than staying in the dormitory.

建议: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够连贯。建议使用正确的时态和动词形式，避免重复和口语化表达，并提供更具体的细节。

示例: Yes, I used to go to the library as a child because it offered many fun activities. I enjoyed reading novels that interested me, and sometimes I could even buy toys there.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复表达，并使用更准确的词汇。

示例: No, I think children nowadays don't often go to the library because we live in an internet age. Many kids prefer using their phones to play games rather than reading books in the library.

× I think nowadays I am no like go to the library because I have the phone and I can search lots of e-mail informations on my phone.

✓ I think nowadays I don't like to go to the library because I have a phone and I can search lots of email information on my phone.

这里“no like”用法错误，应该用“don't like”表示否定；“the phone”应改为“a phone”，因为这里指的是泛指一部手机；“e-mail informations”中“informations”是不可数名词，应改为“information”。

× But when I was a kid I like went to library because at that time I didn't have phone so I have no any other entertainments.

✓ But when I was a kid I liked going to the library because at that time I didn't have a phone so I had no other entertainments.

“like went”时态错误，应使用过去式“liked”并且后面接动名词“going”；“library”前应加定冠词“the”；“didn't have phone”应加不定冠词“a phone”；“have no any other entertainments”时态和用法错误，应改为“had no other entertainments”。

× I am a university students and our dormitory was not the air condition, so I always go to the library to enjoy the air condition here because it was very hot in the summer day.

✓ I am a university student and our dormitory did not have air conditioning, so I always go to the library to enjoy the air conditioning here because it was very hot in the summer days.

“students”应为单数“student”，因为主语是“I”；“was not the air condition”表达错误，应改为“did not have air conditioning”；“air condition”应为不可数名词“air conditioning”；“summer day”应为复数“summer days”。

× So I will be very annoying in the dormitory and I will go to the library, you know?

✓ So I would be very annoyed in the dormitory and I would go to the library, you know?

这里描述的是过去的习惯，应该用过去将来时“would”而不是将来时“will”；“annoying”是形容词，表示令人烦恼的，应改为“annoyed”，表示感到烦恼。

× Yes, when I was a kid, I like go to the library because library has lots of entertainment activities.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid, I liked going to the library because the library had lots of entertainment activities.

“like go”时态错误，应使用过去式“liked”并接动名词“going”；“library”前应加定冠词“the”；“has”应改为过去式“had”。

× I can reading some novels which I was like and I can also buy some toys in the library, you know?

✓ I can read some novels which I liked and I can also buy some toys in the library, you know?

“can reading”用法错误，应为“can read”；“which I was like”时态和结构错误，应为“which I liked”。

× No, I think nowadays kids don't like doesn't like go to a library because of we live in a Internet life and lots of kids has the phone, so they would like to play the phone instead of reading book in the library.

✓ No, I think nowadays kids don't like to go to the library because we live in an Internet life and lots of kids have phones, so they would like to play on their phones instead of reading books in the library.

“don't like doesn't like”重复错误，应为“don't like”；“go to a library”应为“go to the library”；“because of we live”结构错误，应为“because we live”；“an Internet life”前应加不定冠词“an”；“lots of kids has”主谓不一致，应为“lots of kids have”；“play the phone”表达错误，应为“play on their phones”；“reading book”应为复数“reading books”。