图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như "enhance my emotion". Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như "no?" ở cuối câu.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library to read books about literature and life because I want to improve my knowledge and broaden my perspective.

建议: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh câu bị ngắt quãng và thiếu liên kết. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như "myself" nhiều lần.

示例: In the library, I usually read books and study quietly because it helps me gain new knowledge and improve my skills.

建议: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như "when I was tried" và "I owe". Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng thì quá khứ đúng và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai nghĩa.

示例: When I was a child, I didn't often go to the library because I preferred to hang out with my friends.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc đúng để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình.

示例: I think it depends. Hardworking kids usually go to the library, but many prefer to spend time with their friends instead.

× Sometime I go to the library to find some books about literature, about life, to enhance my knowledge and enhance my emotion, no?

✓ Sometimes I go to the library to find some books about literature, about life, to enhance my knowledge and enhance my emotions, right?

The word 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). Also, 'emotion' should be plural 'emotions' because it refers to feelings in general, which are countable in this context. 'No?' is informal and better replaced with 'right?' for clarity.

× In the library I always reading books, studying here and there and. Find new knowledge to enhance myself and develop myself.

✓ In the library, I am always reading books, studying here and there, and finding new knowledge to enhance and develop myself.

The verb 'reading' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. The phrase 'Find new knowledge' should be 'finding new knowledge' to maintain parallel structure with 'reading' and 'studying'. Also, 'enhance myself and develop myself' can be simplified to 'enhance and develop myself' for conciseness.

× When I was tried, actually I didn't go to the library because I owe. I used to hang out with my friend.

✓ When I was tired, actually I didn't go to the library because I was busy. I used to hang out with my friends.

'Tried' is incorrect; it should be 'tired' to express fatigue. 'I owe' is unclear and likely a mistake; 'I was busy' fits the context better. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the usual usage when talking about hanging out with more than one person.

× I think it's depend on if a hard working try they will go to library and in the contract they always have with friends and they will not go to the library usually.

✓ I think it depends on whether they are hardworking; if they are, they will go to the library, but usually they spend time with friends and do not go to the library.

'It's depend on' should be 'it depends on' for subject-verb agreement. 'If a hard working try' is incorrect; it should be 'whether they are hardworking'. 'In the contract they always have with friends' is unclear and likely a misuse of 'contract'; it should be 'usually they spend time with friends'. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the' before 'library'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.