图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时应避免重复表达，语言更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地说明去图书馆的原因，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I have weekly quizzes and assignments. Especially during midterms and finals, I spend a lot of time there to prepare thoroughly.

建议: 回答结构较好，但句子衔接可更自然，避免简单句堆砌。可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: I usually complete my assignments and prepare for quizzes in the library because it offers a quiet environment that helps me concentrate. Additionally, I like to read books there in my spare time to broaden my horizons.

建议: 回答中时态使用不够准确，且句子结构稍显复杂。建议使用简单时态并注意句子完整性。

示例: Yes, I did. When I was a child, my mother realized that reading could expand my knowledge, so she often took me to the library and bought me many books.

建议: 回答内容丰富，但句子较长且结构复杂，建议分句表达并使用更自然的连接词。

示例: Definitely yes. Chinese schools are academically intense, so children need to expand their knowledge and develop skills like interpretation and creativity. Therefore, libraries provide many books that help broaden their horizons and improve their abilities.

× I have quiz and assignment each week and I oblige to spend a lot of time in library especially in final term and midterm.

✓ I have quizzes and assignments each week and I am obliged to spend a lot of time in the library especially in the final term and midterm.

这里的quiz和assignment是可数名词，表示多个测验和作业，应该用复数形式quizzes和assignments。

× I oblige to spend a lot of time in library especially in final term and midterm.

✓ I am obliged to spend a lot of time in the library especially in the final term and midterm.

动词oblige后面通常用被动形式be obliged to，且地点名词library前应加定冠词the。

× I was emerged in all kinds of assignments and exams so I spent a lot of time in library.

✓ I was immersed in all kinds of assignments and exams so I spent a lot of time in the library.

这里应使用过去时态was immersed，且动词emerge用法错误，应为immerse，表示沉浸于。

× I was emerged in all kinds of assignments and exams so I spent a lot of time in library.

✓ I was immersed in all kinds of assignments and exams so I spent a lot of time in the library.

地点名词library前应加定冠词the。

× Well, because library provides a quiet environment that helps me focus better on my studies.

✓ Well, because the library provides a quiet environment that helps me focus better on my studies.

地点名词library前应加定冠词the。

× So I usually complete my assignment or prepare for my quiz and test in library.

✓ So I usually complete my assignments or prepare for my quizzes and tests in the library.

assignment, quiz, test均为可数名词，表示多个，应使用复数形式。

× So I usually complete my assignment or prepare for my quiz and test in library.

✓ So I usually complete my assignments or prepare for my quizzes and tests in the library.

地点名词library前应加定冠词the。

× And in my spare time I choose to read some books in libraries to widen my horizons.

✓ And in my spare time I choose to read some books in the library to widen my horizons.

这里指的是特定的图书馆，通常用单数the library。

× Yes I did because when I was a kid my mom has realized that it's reading that can expand my scope of knowledge and widen my horizons.

✓ Yes I did because when I was a kid my mom had realized that it's reading that can expand my scope of knowledge and widen my horizons.

描述过去的过去时，应该用过去完成时had realized。

× Thus she brought me to library frequently and also bought me a lot of books to.

✓ Thus she brought me to the library frequently and also bought me a lot of books too.

地点名词library前应加定冠词the；句尾too表示“也”，拼写错误。

× Thus she brought me to library frequently and also bought me a lot of books to.

✓ Thus she brought me to the library frequently and also bought me a lot of books too.

句尾的to应为too，表示“也”，属于代词用法错误。

× Definitely yes, because Chinese schools are intense academically and kids are required to expand their knowledge and improve their ability such as interpretation and creativity so as to improve their competence.

✓ Definitely yes, because Chinese schools are intense academically and kids are required to expand their knowledge and improve their abilities such as interpretation and creativity so as to improve their competence.

ability应使用复数abilities，因为后面列举了多种能力。

× Thus, library is a good place to provide a lot of books to broaden their horizons and improve them.

✓ Thus, the library is a good place that provides a lot of books to broaden their horizons and improve themselves.

library前应加定冠词the；动词provide后不直接接不定式，应改为that provides；improve后应接反身代词themselves。

× Thus, library is a good place to provide a lot of books to broaden their horizons and improve them.

✓ Thus, the library is a good place that provides a lot of books to broaden their horizons and improve themselves.

improve后面应使用反身代词themselves，表示“他们自己提高”。