图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

示例: Yes, I often go to the library because I enjoy reading different types of books. Reading is one of my favorite hobbies, and the library offers a quiet place to focus.

建议: Bạn nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: When I go to the library, I usually pick several books and find a comfortable seat to read. I really enjoy the peaceful atmosphere because it helps me concentrate.

建议: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ và ngữ pháp để câu trả lời chính xác hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

示例: Yes, I did. My mom used to take me to the library when I was a child because she believed it would help improve my reading skills.

建议: Bạn nên cố gắng trả lời câu hỏi hoặc đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân thay vì từ chối trả lời. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và lịch sự để thể hiện sự hiểu biết hoặc quan điểm của bạn.

示例: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but in my country, many children often go to the library to study and read books.

× Yes, I often go to the library to read some kinds of books that I very like.

✓ Yes, I often go to the library to read some kinds of books that I really like.

The phrase 'I very like' is incorrect because 'like' is a verb and 'very' cannot modify verbs directly. Instead, 'really' should be used to modify the verb 'like'. This is not a singular/plural issue but a misuse of adverb. However, since 'some kinds of books' is acceptable, no plural correction is needed here.

× I am a person that like reading books and reading book is my of the most favorite hobbies.

✓ I am a person who likes reading books and reading books is one of my most favorite hobbies.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject 'person' (third person singular). Also, 'reading book' should be plural 'reading books' to match the general activity. The phrase 'my of the most favorite hobbies' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my most favorite hobbies' to express that reading books is among several favorite hobbies.

× I very enjoy the peacefulness here.

✓ I really enjoy the peacefulness here.

The adverb 'very' cannot modify the verb 'enjoy' directly. Instead, 'really' should be used to modify the verb. This is an issue with adverb usage, not verb + -ing form, but since 'enjoy' is a verb, the correction is necessary here.

× Yes I do. My mom used to take me to the library when I was a kid because she think that is very useful for my improvement, especially in reading skills.

✓ Yes, I did. My mom used to take me to the library when I was a kid because she thought that it was very useful for my improvement, especially in reading skills.

The response to a past tense question should be in past tense: 'Yes, I did' instead of 'Yes, I do'. The verb 'think' should be in past tense 'thought' to agree with 'used to'. Also, 'that is' should be 'that it was' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Sorry, I don't of it.

✓ Sorry, I don't know about it.

The phrase 'don't of it' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'don't know about it'. The preposition 'about' is necessary after 'know' to indicate the object of knowledge.

× I am not obvious about this question because I am Vietnamese so I don't know about Chinese kids.

✓ I am not sure about this question because I am Vietnamese so I don't know about Chinese kids.

The adjective 'obvious' is incorrectly used here. The correct adjective is 'sure' to express uncertainty. 'Obvious' means clear or evident, which does not fit the intended meaning.