图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答不够自然，时态使用不准确，且表达有些冗长。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意时态一致，并避免重复表达。

示例: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading ebooks on my iPad and playing games on my phone when I have free time.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并且注意单词拼写和语法正确。

示例: I usually read nonfiction books and do my homework using my computer and iPad in the library because it is very quiet there.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达过去的习惯，并注意动词时态和词汇的准确使用。

示例: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid. Instead, my mother bought many books for me, so I could read them freely at home.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议使用正确的介词和词汇搭配，并使句子更流畅。

示例: Yes, I think more and more Chinese kids are going to libraries nowadays because they offer many new books and ebooks, which makes them very appealing.

× No, to tell the truth, I didn't go to the library when I'm free because of the playful phones and computer games.

✓ No, to tell the truth, I didn't go to the library when I was free because of the playful phones and computer games.

这里的时间是过去时态，'when I'm free' 应该用过去时 'when I was free'，因为描述的是过去的情况。

× I often read some books in the library such as the non fictions and I always do my homework with my computer and iPad in the library because it is silent silent there.

✓ I often read some books in the library such as nonfiction books and I always do my homework with my computer and iPad in the library because it is very quiet there.

'non fictions' 应为不可数名词 'nonfiction books'，且重复的 'silent silent' 应改为 'very quiet'，使表达更自然。

× No, actually I didn't. In my childhood, my room and four books. My mother always buy various books for me and I can reduce in my house freely.

✓ No, actually I didn't. In my childhood, I had a room and four books. My mother always bought various books for me and I could read in my house freely.

句子缺少谓语动词，'my room and four books' 应补充 'I had'；'buy' 应用过去式 'bought'；'can reduce' 应为 'could read'，且 'reduce' 是错误单词，应为 'read'。

× Yes, I think more and more Chinese kids are going to library in this area because the libraries now are equipped with the e-books and various of new books and this appealing.

✓ Yes, I think more and more Chinese kids are going to the library in this area because the libraries now are equipped with e-books and various new books, and this is appealing.

'going to library' 应为 'going to the library'，需要定冠词；'various of new books' 应为 'various new books'，'various' 后不加 'of'；句末缺少主语和谓语，补充 'this is appealing'。