图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "I don't go to the library so often" ifadesi doğru ancak "I would like to cause like I love, I love admire how to people can study in library" kısmı anlam açısından karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha net ve kısa cümleler kurarak kendinizi ifade edin.

示例: I don't go to the library very often, but I admire how people can focus and study there in a quiet environment.

建议: Cümle yapılarında zaman uyumuna dikkat etmelisiniz. "I usually studying" yerine "I usually study" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı ve mantıklı bir anlatım sağlayabilirsiniz.

示例: I usually study for my exams or do my homework in the library. Also, I like reading books while drinking coffee because it's very peaceful and comfortable there.

建议: Geçmiş zaman kullanımı konusunda dikkatli olun. "I was went" yanlış, doğru kullanım "I went" olmalı. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha açık ve anlaşılır hale getirmek için basit ve doğru yapılar kullanın.

示例: Yes, I went to the library with my sister when I was a kid. She studied for her exams, and I sat next to her. She always told me to be quiet there.

建议: Cümle yapılarında tekrar ve dilbilgisi hatalarından kaçının. "they they reading" yerine "they read" ve "doing them homeworks" yerine "doing their homework" kullanılmalı. Ayrıca, daha spesifik ve detaylı cevaplar vermeye çalışın.

示例: Yes, I think Chinese kids often go to the library. They read books, do their homework, and study for exams there.

× I usually studying for my exams or doing my homeworks.

✓ I usually study for my exams or do my homework.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form of the verb, not the '-ing' form. 'Studying' and 'doing' are incorrect here; the correct forms are 'study' and 'do'. Also, 'homeworks' is incorrect as 'homework' is an uncountable noun.

× doing my homeworks

✓ doing my homework

'Homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. The correct form is 'homework'.

× Also I reading books while drinking my coffee and it's very peaceful and quiet and I feel very comfortable in there.

✓ Also I read books while drinking my coffee and it's very peaceful and quiet and I feel very comfortable there.

'I reading' is incorrect; after 'I' the base form 'read' should be used. Also, 'in there' is better expressed as 'there' in this context.

× I was went there with my sister.

✓ I went there with my sister.

'Was went' is incorrect because 'went' is already the past tense of 'go'. The auxiliary 'was' should not be used here.

× I'm sitting next to her and she always told me that I have had to be quiet in there and I'm just in there.

✓ I sat next to her and she always told me that I had to be quiet there and I just stayed there.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. 'I'm sitting' should be past tense 'I sat'. 'I have had to be quiet' should be 'I had to be quiet'. 'I'm just in there' is unclear and should be 'I just stayed there'. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there'.

× doing them homeworks

✓ doing their homework

'Them homeworks' is incorrect; the possessive pronoun 'their' should be used and 'homework' is uncountable and should not be pluralized.

× they they reading books in there and also doing them homeworks and studying for their exams.

✓ they are reading books there and also doing their homework and studying for their exams.

The verb phrase needs the auxiliary 'are' before the '-ing' form to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'in there' is better as 'there'.