图书馆— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain your preference with reasons and examples.

示例: I rarely visit the library nowadays because I prefer reading books online, which is more convenient. However, during my graduation, I often went to the school library to enhance my knowledge and prepare for exams.

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating phrases. Also, try to be more concise and clear.

示例: As I mentioned, I used to visit the library during my graduation to read subject-related books. This helped me gain deeper knowledge and broaden my understanding, which was useful for exam preparation.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly with correct sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

示例: If I remember correctly, I rarely went to the library as a child because most educational materials were available at school, so I did not see the need to visit the library.

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating similar phrases. Also, try to be more specific and concise.

示例: I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries to expand their knowledge and support their studies. However, with the rise of ebooks, many students now prefer digital resources for convenience.

× I visit library very rarely.

✓ I visit the library very rarely.

In English, when referring to a specific place like 'library' in a general sense, the definite article 'the' is used. Saying 'visit library' without 'the' is incorrect because 'library' is a countable noun and requires an article here.

× I use.

✓ I use it.

The sentence 'I use.' is incomplete and lacks an object. To be grammatically correct, it should specify what is being used, for example, 'I use it.' or be combined with the next sentence for clarity.

× I prefer to read books that are available online as they are more convenient and easy to read.

✓ I prefer to read books that are available online as they are more convenient and easier to read.

The phrase 'more convenient and easy to read' is inconsistent. When using comparative 'more' with one adjective, the other adjective should also be in comparative form, so 'easy' should be 'easier'.

× But when I was presenting my graduation, I used to go to library in my school in order to enhance my knowledge and.

✓ But when I was pursuing my graduation, I used to go to the library in my school in order to enhance my knowledge.

The phrase 'presenting my graduation' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'pursuing my graduation' meaning studying for a degree. Also, 'go to library' requires the definite article 'the' before 'library'. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected accordingly.

× Well, I as I mentioned earlier, I used to go library when I was pursuing my graduation and I used to read books of my subjects so that I could get good knowledge and widens the horizon of my mind in order to prepare good for my exams.

✓ Well, as I mentioned earlier, I used to go to the library when I was pursuing my graduation and I used to read books of my subjects so that I could gain good knowledge and widen the horizon of my mind in order to prepare well for my exams.

The phrase 'go library' needs the definite article 'to the library'. 'Get good knowledge' is better expressed as 'gain good knowledge'. 'Widens' should be 'widen' to match the subject. 'Prepare good' should be 'prepare well' as 'well' is the correct adverb here.

× If my memory serves me right, I usually don't want to do library for reading books because when I was a child there was education available in the books in the school, so I didn't find any use to go to library.

✓ If my memory serves me right, I usually didn't want to go to the library for reading books because when I was a child there was education available in the books in the school, so I didn't find any use in going to the library.

'Don't want to do library' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'didn't want to go to the library'. Also, 'find any use to go to library' should be 'find any use in going to the library'. The tense is corrected to past to match the time frame.

× As far as I am concerned, I do think so that Chinese prefer to go to the library in order to expand their knowledge and provide and to get extra knowledge regarding their studies.

✓ As far as I am concerned, I do think that Chinese people prefer to go to the library in order to expand their knowledge and to get extra knowledge regarding their studies.

'I do think so that' is incorrect; it should be 'I do think that'. 'Chinese' as a noun referring to people should be 'Chinese people'. The phrase 'and provide and to get' is incorrect and has been corrected to 'and to get'.

× But nowadays there is availability of ebooks where everybody can prepare well.

✓ But nowadays there is availability of ebooks where everybody can prepare well.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No correction needed.