列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details. For example, you can say you make a list before shopping to ensure you don't forget anything, and mention what kind of items you usually include.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping to make sure I don't forget anything important. For instance, I often include groceries and makeup items on my list to keep track of what I need to buy.

建议: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using the correct tense and adding linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, briefly explain why your method works for you to enrich your response.

示例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I have a sharp memory. Therefore, I can remember all the tasks I need to complete during my shift without writing them down.

建议: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, clarify your points with specific examples and avoid confusing phrases like 'for the pandemic'.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because technology offers many apps, such as reminders and alarms, that help them remember tasks. As a result, they prefer using these digital tools instead of writing lists.

建议: Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and provide specific reasons.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often forget where I wrote things down on paper. Using my phone helps me keep all my reminders in one place and makes it easier to access them.

× Well, to be honest, uh, I usually making a list which I have to, uh, bought things, umm, when I'm going outside, I usually, uh, bought the things that I already, uh, wrote, wrote on my list.

✓ Well, to be honest, uh, I usually make a list of things I have to buy. When I go outside, I usually buy the things that I already wrote on my list.

The phrase 'I usually making a list' is incorrect because 'usually' requires the base form of the verb, so it should be 'I usually make a list' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8). Also, 'bought things' is past tense used incorrectly here; it should be 'buy things' to match the present habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID: 6). Additionally, 'wrote, wrote' is repetitive and should be 'wrote'. The sentence structure was adjusted for clarity and correctness.

× I usually, uh, bought the things that I already, uh, wrote, wrote on my list.

✓ I usually buy the things that I already wrote on my list.

The use of 'bought' (past tense) is incorrect when describing a habitual action; the present tense 'buy' should be used instead (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5). The repetition 'wrote, wrote' is an error and should be corrected to a single 'wrote'.

× No, I didn't make any type of list for my work because I have a sharp memory and I know everything and all tasks which I have to do during my shift.

✓ No, I don't make any type of list for my work because I have a sharp memory and I know everything and all tasks which I have to do during my shift.

The sentence uses past tense 'didn't make' incorrectly when referring to a habitual present action. It should be present tense 'don't make' to indicate current habits (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5).

× Well, nowadays with the advancement of technology, we have so many apps which remind us to do the pending task, for example, the reminders, alarms and so on.

✓ Well, nowadays, with the advancement of technology, we have so many apps that remind us to do pending tasks, for example, reminders, alarms, and so on.

The phrase 'which remind us to do the pending task' is awkward; 'that remind us to do pending tasks' is more natural. Also, 'the pending task' should be plural 'pending tasks' to match the context (Grammar Problem Type ID: 14). The definite article 'the' before 'pending task' is unnecessary here (Grammar Problem Type ID: 17).

× So nowadays people do not waste, do not waste their time to making for making any type of list for the pandemic where they usually prefer reminders.

✓ So nowadays, people do not waste their time making any type of list; instead, they usually prefer reminders.

The phrase 'waste their time to making for making' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'waste their time making' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'for the pandemic' seems out of context and likely a mishearing or error; it was removed for clarity. The sentence was restructured for clarity and correctness.

× I usually put a reminders for my pending work, so according to me I usually prefer a phone because sometimes I just forget where I have where I had to write all the things like for the list, so I usually prefer phone.

✓ I usually set reminders for my pending work, so I prefer using my phone because sometimes I forget where I wrote all the things on the list.

'Put a reminders' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set reminders' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). 'According to me' is unnatural; it was omitted for clarity. 'I usually prefer a phone' should be 'I prefer using my phone' for natural expression. The phrase 'where I have where I had to write all the things like for the list' is confusing and was corrected to 'where I wrote all the things on the list' for clarity and correctness.