列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to use correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid redundancy. Also, make your answer more coherent by linking ideas and using complete sentences.

示例: I usually make a list when I go to the grocery store because I often forget what I need to buy for dinner. However, when I visit the mall, I don't usually make a list since I just browse for items.

建议: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct grammar. Provide a direct answer and explain how making a list helps you, using linking words for clarity.

示例: I am a student, so I don't have a job. However, when I study, I make a list of topics and the time I plan to start each one. Following this list helps me to organise my study time and improve my learning.

建议: Work on clarity and coherence by using complete sentences and linking words. Explain reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to follow strict schedules. They may prefer to be more spontaneous and do tasks when they feel like it rather than sticking to a plan.

建议: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid redundancy.

示例: Although I don't like making lists, if I have to choose, I prefer to use paper. This is because when I use my smartphone, I often get distracted by social media and videos, so paper helps me stay focused.

× When I like go to grocery store I made a list because I totally forgot what I have to buy for dinner or something to eat.

✓ When I like to go to the grocery store, I make a list because I might forget what I have to buy for dinner or something to eat.

The sentence mixes past tense 'made' with present context. Since the question is about habitual action, present tense 'make' is appropriate. Also, 'like go' should be 'like to go' for correct verb form.

× When I like go to grocery store I made a list because I totally forgot what I have to buy for dinner or something to eat.

✓ When I like to go to the grocery store, I make a list because I might forget what I have to buy for dinner or something to eat.

The noun 'grocery store' needs the definite article 'the' to specify the place. Also, 'grocery store' is singular and correctly used here.

× But when I go to mall I will not make list.

✓ But when I go to the mall, I will not make a list.

The noun 'mall' requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'make list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'. The future tense 'will not make' is appropriate here.

× But when I go to mall I will not make list.

✓ But when I go to the mall, I will not make a list.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× I am student so I'm never work but when I when I studying I make a list like how what time we I have to start this topic or and maybe I follow the list so it helps me to improve my.

✓ I am a student, so I never work, but when I am studying, I make a list of what time I have to start each topic, and I follow the list because it helps me improve.

The sentence has several tense and article errors. 'I am student' needs the article 'a'. 'I'm never work' should be 'I never work' or 'I am never working' but present simple 'I never work' fits better. 'When I when I studying' should be 'when I am studying' for present continuous. The phrase 'like how what time we I have to start this topic' is unclear and corrected to 'of what time I have to start each topic'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct tense usage.

× I make a list like how what time we I have to start this topic or and maybe I follow the list so it helps me to improve my.

✓ I make a list of what time I have to start each topic, and I follow the list because it helps me improve.

The original sentence uses 'or and maybe' incorrectly. The conjunction 'and' is appropriate to connect the ideas. Also, 'like how what time we I have to start this topic' is corrected to 'of what time I have to start each topic' for clarity.

× I make a list like how what time we I have to start this topic or and maybe I follow the list so it helps me to improve my.

✓ I make a list of what time I have to start each topic, and I follow the list because it helps me improve.

The pronouns 'we I' are incorrect and confusing. It should be 'I' to match the subject of the sentence.

× I follow the list so it helps me to improve my.

✓ I follow the list because it helps me improve.

The phrase 'improve my' is incomplete; it should specify what is improved or be left as 'improve' to imply improvement generally.

× For me, I don't like making list 'cause it's difficult to follow the strict let's.

✓ For me, I don't like making lists because it's difficult to follow strict rules.

The conjunction 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate. 'Let's' is incorrect here; likely intended 'lists' or 'rules'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making lists' as plural.

× For me, I don't like making list 'cause it's difficult to follow the strict let's.

✓ For me, I don't like making lists because it's difficult to follow strict rules.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of general dislike. 'Let's' is a typo or mishearing and corrected to 'rules' for meaning.

× So maybe a lot of time of people think I wanna do like like sometimes I saw it OK, I wanna do it or next time I.

✓ So maybe a lot of people think I want to do it, like sometimes I say, 'OK, I want to do it,' or 'next time I will.'

The phrase 'a lot of time of people' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of people'. 'Wanna' is informal; 'want to' is preferred. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct quantifier use.

× So maybe a lot of time of people think I wanna do like like sometimes I saw it OK, I wanna do it or next time I.

✓ So maybe a lot of people think I want to do it, like sometimes I say, 'OK, I want to do it,' or 'next time I will.'

The pronoun 'I saw it' is incorrect; likely intended 'I say it'. Correct pronoun and verb usage is necessary for clarity.

× I don't like make a list, so if I have to choose, I will choose paper.

✓ I don't like to make a list, so if I have to choose, I will choose paper.

The verb 'like' is usually followed by the infinitive 'to make' rather than the bare infinitive 'make'.

× Because when I if I use smartphone, maybe I will not make a list.

✓ Because if I use a smartphone, maybe I will not make a list.

The phrase 'when I if I' is incorrect; only one conjunction 'if' is needed. Also, 'smartphone' requires the indefinite article 'a'.

× I will go another like social media and watch like some videos.

✓ I will go to social media and watch some videos.

The phrase 'go another like social media' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'go to social media'. Also, 'like' before 'some videos' is unnecessary.

× So maybe I'm gonna choose paper 1 is the best for me.

✓ So maybe I'm going to choose paper; it is the best for me.

The phrase 'paper 1' is unclear and likely a typo. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper singular usage.