列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'make list' 대신 'make a list'를 사용해야 하며, 이유 설명이 명확하지 않고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 좀 더 간결하고 명확하게 이유를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

示例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I find it difficult to plan everything in advance.

建议: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'make the list of tasks in the day' 대신 'make a list of tasks for the day'가 더 적절합니다. 또한 'but it can be followed'는 의미가 불분명하므로 명확한 설명이 필요합니다.

示例: Yes, when I arrive at the office in the morning, I make a list of tasks for the day, and I usually follow it to stay organized.

建议: 질문에 대한 답변이 전혀 맞지 않고 문법적으로도 부정확합니다. 질문에 맞게 부정적인 이유를 제시해야 하며, 중복된 단어를 제거하고 명확한 문장을 만들어야 합니다.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to work spontaneously.

建议: 문장이 다소 어색하고 중복된 단어가 있습니다. 'make the list of my phone' 대신 'make a list on my phone'이 자연스럽습니다. 또한 문장을 간결하게 다듬고 연결어를 사용해 흐름을 개선할 필요가 있습니다.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I can check my tasks anytime easily.

× No, I don't make list for my shopping because, uh. Making list is. Very tough.

✓ No, I don't make lists for my shopping because, uh, making lists is very tough.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making multiple lists, not just one. Also, 'making list is very tough' should be 'making lists is very tough' to maintain consistency and correct plural usage.

× Yes, when I go into company in the morning, I make the list of tasks in the day, but it can be followed.

✓ Yes, when I go into the company in the morning, I make a list of tasks for the day, but it can be followed.

'Company' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific company. 'The list' should be 'a list' because it is one of many possible lists. 'In the day' should be 'for the day' to correctly express the time period the tasks cover.

× Yes, when I go into company in the morning, I make the list of tasks in the day, but it can be followed.

✓ Yes, when I go into the company in the morning, I make a list of tasks for the day, but it can be followed.

The noun 'company' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific company. Also, 'the list' is better as 'a list' here because it is not a previously mentioned list.

× Making the list can improve improve the. Work for efficiency.

✓ Making lists can improve work efficiency.

'The list' should be 'lists' to generalize the statement. 'The work' is better as just 'work' because it refers to work in general. Also, the sentence is simplified for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to make the list of my phone because I always bring the phone and using it, so I. I can check my task list all the time every every time.

✓ I prefer to make the list on my phone because I always bring my phone and use it, so I can check my task list all the time.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect; it should be 'on' when referring to making a list on a device. 'Using it' should be 'use it' to maintain parallel verb forms. Also, 'my phone' is better than 'the phone' for possession. Repetition of 'every every time' is removed for clarity.