列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and slightly unclear. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid repeating phrases. Also, focus on directly answering the question with clear reasons and examples. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' properly to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember the items I need to buy. Also, it prevents me from forgetting important things and saves time during shopping.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'make a life for time schedule'. Try to use simple and correct expressions. Also, avoid repeating words like 'time' unnecessarily. Make your answer more structured by stating your experience clearly and then explaining the benefits.

示例: I didn't use to make lists for my work, but when my teacher suggested it, I started making schedules. It really helps me manage and balance my time effectively.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and improving sentence structure. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, be careful with articles and plural forms, for example, 'making lists' instead of 'making list'.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and they can remember what to buy. However, I think making lists is helpful before shopping or working.

建议: Your answer is a bit repetitive and some phrases are awkward, like 'contemporary contemporary era'. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, use linking words like 'but' and 'nowadays' properly to show contrast and time changes.

示例: Earlier, I preferred making lists on paper because smartphones were not common. But nowadays, I prefer using my phone to make lists since it is more convenient.

× Yes, indeed I make a list when I shop because I think it is a very good way to for shopping because it helps us to remember the things that I that I purchased that I going to purchase.

✓ Yes, indeed I make a list when I shop because I think it is a very good way for shopping because it helps us to remember the things that I am going to purchase.

The phrase 'that I that I purchased that I going to purchase' is incorrect. The correct form is 'that I am going to purchase' using the verb + -ing form with the auxiliary verb 'am' to indicate the future intention. Also, 'to for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'for shopping'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And apart from that it also helps us to enhance our writing skills and recalling skills.

✓ And apart from that, it also helps us to enhance our writing skills and recall skills.

The word 'recalling' is a gerund here but the correct noun form is 'recall' when referring to the ability or skill. Using 'recall skills' is more appropriate and grammatically correct in this context.

× Well, earlier I did not make any list or schedule but at that time when my teacher told me to make a life for time schedule then I started to make it and it is really viable for me because it helps me to manage my time and balance my time.

✓ Well, earlier I did not make any list or schedule but at that time when my teacher told me to make a life or time schedule then I started to make it and it is really viable for me because it helps me to manage my time and balance my time.

The phrase 'make a life for time schedule' is incorrect. It seems the intended phrase is 'make a life or time schedule'. Also, 'list or schedule' is correct as singular nouns here. The correction clarifies the meaning and fixes the singular/plural usage.

× Some people do not make lists because they think that making list is totally waste of time and they think that the what they can purchase they will remember at the moment of time.

✓ Some people do not make lists because they think that making a list is a total waste of time and they think that what they can purchase they will remember at the moment.

The phrase 'making list is totally waste of time' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list is a total waste of time'. Also, 'at the moment of time' is redundant; 'at the moment' suffices. These corrections fix article usage and prepositional errors.

× But I don't think so because I believe in making lists before going to shopping or before your work.

✓ But I don't think so because I believe in making lists before going shopping or before work.

The phrase 'before going to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'before going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'before your work' is better as 'before work' to maintain generality and correct pronoun usage.

× Well, if you ask me this question earlier, then I surely say that I prefer to make list on paper because earlier there was no use of smartphones.

✓ Well, if you had asked me this question earlier, then I would surely say that I preferred to make lists on paper because earlier there was no use of smartphones.

The sentence mixes tenses incorrectly. 'If you ask me this question earlier' should be 'If you had asked me this question earlier' to indicate a past hypothetical. Also, 'I surely say' should be 'I would surely say' to match the conditional. 'Make list' should be 'make lists' for plural consistency.

× But nowadays because of the contemporary contemporary era, there are a lot of smartphone uses.

✓ But nowadays, because of the contemporary era, there is a lot of smartphone use.

The phrase 'contemporary contemporary era' repeats the adjective unnecessarily. Also, 'there are a lot of smartphone uses' is incorrect; 'there is a lot of smartphone use' is correct because 'use' is uncountable here.

× So I can make I can prefer to make a list on phone rather than on paper.

✓ So I can prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper.

The phrase 'I can make I can prefer' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'I can prefer'. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to correctly use the possessive pronoun and preposition.