列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, ví dụ như 'go to shopping' nên là 'go shopping'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting important items.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời hiện tại hơi lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'helps me to control' nên là 'help me control'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

示例: I don't usually make lists for work, so I can't say if they are effective. However, I do make plans to stay motivated and balance my work and relaxation.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên chia câu thành các phần rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối và tránh lỗi như 'anythings' (phải là 'anything'). Hãy cung cấp lý do cụ thể và rõ ràng hơn.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel lazy or believe their memory is good enough. Also, elderly people or children might not make lists since they don't usually need to shop.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không mạch lạc, ví dụ như 'when and go with it everywhere' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi như 'everythings' (phải là 'everything').

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list and remember everything I need to buy.

× Yes, when I go to shopping I usually make a list to remember that everything I need to buy because I don't have a good memory so I could forget something important when I go to the shop.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping I usually make a list to remember everything I need to buy because I don't have a good memory so I could forget something important when I go to the shop.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by the verb in the -ing form without 'to' when indicating an activity. This is a common verb + -ing form usage error.

× So make a list to before going shopping is help me to memorize and buy it easily.

✓ So making a list before going shopping helps me to remember and buy things easily.

The original sentence has incorrect preposition use and awkward structure. 'Make a list to before going shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list before going shopping'. Also, 'is help me' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me'. Prepositions and verb forms must be used correctly for clarity.

× Well to be honest I don't make lists for my work so I don't know how effective it has, but in my work I usually make plans to help me motivated myself and helps me to control my own life from studying to relaxing.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't make lists for my work so I don't know how effective they are, but at work I usually make plans to help motivate myself and help me control my own life from studying to relaxing.

The phrase 'help me motivated myself' is incorrect; it should be 'help motivate myself'. Also, 'helps me to control' should be parallel with 'help motivate'. Modal verb usage and verb forms need to be consistent and correct.

× I think some people don't like making this have many reasons because they are lazy and they think they have good memories of another reason that adults like elderly or children don't make lists because they don't have to buy anythings.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists for many reasons because they are lazy and think they have good memories. Another reason is that adults like the elderly or children don't make lists because they don't have to buy anything.

The word 'this' should be 'lists' to match plural form. 'Anythings' is incorrect; the correct word is 'anything'. Also, 'adults like elderly' should be 'adults like the elderly'. Plural and singular forms must be used correctly.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually put my phones in my purse and when and go with it everywhere.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I usually put my phone in my purse and go everywhere with it.

The phrase 'put my phones in my purse and when and go with it everywhere' is incorrect. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match context. Also, 'when and go with it everywhere' is ungrammatical; it should be 'go everywhere with it'. Prepositions and sentence structure need correction.

× So making a list in my phone easily for me to remember everythings that I need to buy and I have a bad memories so everything from my purse.

✓ So making a list on my phone makes it easy for me to remember everything I need to buy, and I have a bad memory, so everything is in my purse.

'Everythings' is incorrect; the correct word is 'everything' (uncountable). 'Bad memories' should be 'bad memory' (uncountable). Also, 'making a list in my phone easily for me' is awkward; it should be 'making a list on my phone makes it easy for me'. Singular and plural forms and sentence structure need correction.