列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'go to shopping' (should be 'go shopping'). Also, try to use a linking word to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I have a sharp memory, so I can remember everything I need to buy.

建议: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar (e.g., 'make list' should be 'make lists') and by using linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating the question phrase 'Does it work?'.

示例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them a bit time-consuming and not very effective. Instead, I prefer to keep things in my mind or use reminders on my phone, which work better for my daily routine.

建议: Try to start with a topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, use plural forms correctly ('making lists') and be more specific in your explanation.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find them outdated and inconvenient to carry around. Therefore, they prefer setting reminders on their phones instead.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like 'First of all'.

示例: I don't usually like making lists, but if I have to, I prefer to make them on my phone because it's more convenient and easier to access than paper lists.

× No, I usually do not make any list when I go to shopping because I have a sharp memory and I remember all the things that I going to buy.

✓ No, I usually do not make any lists when I go shopping because I have a sharp memory and I remember all the things that I am going to buy.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of making a list. Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'I going to buy' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense 'I am going to buy'.

× No, I usually do not make any list when I go to shopping because I have a sharp memory and I remember all the things that I going to buy.

✓ No, I usually do not make any lists when I go shopping because I have a sharp memory and I remember all the things that I am going to buy.

The phrase 'I going to buy' is incorrect because it lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' needed to form the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'I am going to buy'.

× No, I don't usually make list for my work because I found them a bit time consuming and not very effective for me.

✓ No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them a bit time consuming and not very effective for me.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances. Also, 'found' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'find' to match 'don't usually make'.

× No, I don't usually make list for my work because I found them a bit time consuming and not very effective for me.

✓ No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them a bit time consuming and not very effective for me.

The verb 'found' is in past tense but the sentence is about a habitual action, so present tense 'find' should be used.

× Because making list is too outdated and it's difficult to carry the list, people prefer to set reminders on phone rather than making list.

✓ Because making lists is too outdated and it's difficult to carry the list, people prefer to set reminders on their phones rather than making lists.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' when referring to the general activity of making lists. Also, 'on phone' should be 'on their phones' to correctly use the possessive pronoun and plural form.

× Because making list is too outdated and it's difficult to carry the list, people prefer to set reminders on phone rather than making list.

✓ Because making lists is too outdated and it's difficult to carry the list, people prefer to set reminders on their phones rather than making lists.

The preposition 'on phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on their phones' to indicate possession and correct plural form.

× First of all I didn't like to prefer to make a list, but if there is any condition that I have to make a list so I prefer to make it in phone because it's convenient and easy to access rather than use paper list.

✓ First of all, I don't like to prefer to make a list, but if there is any condition that I have to make a list, I prefer to make it on my phone because it's convenient and easy to access rather than using a paper list.

The phrase 'didn't like to prefer' is awkward and inconsistent with the present context; 'don't like to prefer' fits better. 'In phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on my phone'. Also, 'use paper list' should be 'using a paper list' to maintain parallel structure and correct article usage.