列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答有點簡短且語法不太正確，建議你可以用更自然的句子結構，並且說明原因時用更完整的句子。例如，可以說明為什麼覺得做清單浪費時間。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I find it wastes my time. Instead, I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I remember I need.

建议: 你的回答有語法錯誤且表達不清楚，建議你用更正確的句子結構，並且清楚說明你如何使用清單來幫助工作。

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work. Since I am a cram school teacher, I use lists to keep track of when parents will pick up their children, which helps me stay organized and avoid confusion.

建议: 你的回答有語法錯誤且有些重複，建議你用更流暢的句子，並且具體說明原因。

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it takes time and effort. Also, sometimes they forget important tasks, which makes list-making seem difficult or ineffective.

建议: 你的回答內容完整，但語法和句子結構需要改進。建議你用更簡潔且正確的句子來表達你的偏好和理由。

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always carry my phone, so I can quickly type a list anytime, unlike paper lists which require a pen and can be easily lost.

× No, I don't usually make a list when I go to shop since I think that is waste of my time.

✓ No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping since I think that is a waste of my time.

The phrase 'go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' to express the activity. Also, 'waste of my time' needs the article 'a' before 'waste'. In English (Taiwan): 'go to shop' 應改為 'go shopping'，表示進行購物這個動作；另外 'waste of my time' 前面要加不定冠詞 'a'。

× Yes, I did make a list for my work. Since I work at the cram school teacher, I need to know when the parents want to pick up their children.

✓ Yes, I did make a list for my work. Since I work as a cram school teacher, I need to know when the parents want to pick up their children.

The phrase 'work at the cram school teacher' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'work as a cram school teacher' to indicate one's occupation. In English (Taiwan): 'work at the cram school teacher' 應改為 'work as a cram school teacher'，表示職業身份。

× So I I need to know doubt to make it more clear.

✓ So I need to clarify any doubts to make it clearer.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I I need to know doubt' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely to clarify doubts to make things clearer. In English (Taiwan): 原句語意不清且文法錯誤，應改為 'I need to clarify any doubts to make it clearer'，表達釐清疑問使事情更清楚。

× I think the reason why they don't like making this is because like it takes time to making lists and sometimes people would forget to what they want to do so it's hard to make a list.

✓ I think the reason why they don't like making lists is because it takes time to make lists and sometimes people forget what they want to do, so it's hard to make a list.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'making this' should be 'making lists'. 'like it takes time to making lists' should be 'it takes time to make lists'. 'forget to what they want to do' should be 'forget what they want to do'. In English (Taiwan): 'making this' 改為 'making lists'；'like it takes time to making lists' 改為 'it takes time to make lists'；'forget to what they want to do' 改為 'forget what they want to do'，使句子通順且文法正確。

× I I do prefer make a list on my phone 'cause it's more convenient nowadays and since I bring my phone everywhere with me and it just takes a few minutes to type instead of making a list on paper since you need to find a pen when you need to do it on paper.

✓ I do prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient nowadays since I bring my phone everywhere with me, and it just takes a few minutes to type instead of making a list on paper, where you need to find a pen when you want to do it.

The phrase 'prefer make' should be 'prefer to make'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is better in formal speech. The sentence is long and needs commas for clarity. 'when you need to do it on paper' is better as 'when you want to do it'. In English (Taiwan): 'prefer make' 改為 'prefer to make'；'cause' 改為 'because'；加上逗號分隔句子，使語意清楚；'when you need to do it on paper' 改為 'when you want to do it'。