列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and slightly unclear in parts. Try to make your response more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and ensure grammatical accuracy, for example, 'because it helps me remember the items I need and has become a habit.'

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember the items I need. Moreover, it has become a habit that ensures I don't forget anything important.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and lacks linking words. Try to use correct grammar and connect your ideas clearly. For example, say 'it helps me prioritize my tasks and reminds me of what else I need to complete.'

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize my tasks and reminds me of other duties I need to complete.

建议: Your answer is somewhat vague and repetitive. Try to be more specific and structured. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to explain reasons clearly. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'so, yeah.'

示例: Some people avoid making lists because it can be time-consuming. For example, they might not know how to organize their lists effectively, which discourages them from using this method.

建议: Your answer is clear but somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' effectively, and avoid repeating the same idea. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and helps me remember better.'

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and helps me remember tasks better than paper lists, which I often forget or lose.

× Majority of the time whenever I go shopping, I take a list with me because it not only helps me reminding me of the items that I need for my basic expenses, but for it has become quite a bit of habit of mine going shopping and taking a list with me.

✓ The majority of the time whenever I go shopping, I take a list with me because it not only helps remind me of the items that I need for my basic expenses, but it has also become quite a habit of mine to go shopping and take a list with me.

The phrase 'Majority of the time' should be 'The majority of the time' because 'majority' is a singular noun requiring the definite article 'the'. Also, 'helps me reminding me' is incorrect; the verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb without 'to', so it should be 'helps remind me'. The phrase 'but for it has become' is incorrect and should be 'but it has also become'. Additionally, 'quite a bit of habit' is awkward; 'quite a habit' is more natural. Finally, 'going shopping and taking a list with me' should be 'to go shopping and take a list with me' to maintain parallel infinitive forms.

× Most of the time I make a list for my works because it helps me prioritize my work and it keeps me reminder of what other work that I need to fulfill.

✓ Most of the time I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize my work and it keeps me reminded of what other work I need to fulfill.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or job duties, so it should be singular. Also, 'keeps me reminder' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'keeps me reminded' or 'reminds me'. The phrase 'what other work that I need to fulfill' should be 'what other work I need to fulfill' because 'that' is unnecessary in this relative clause.

× I would say that some people don't make list because it's a little time consuming and most of the people that don't make a list don't really know how to make a list or what other items that are needed to be filled on the list.

✓ I would say that some people don't make lists because it's a little time-consuming and most of the people who don't make a list don't really know how to make a list or what other items need to be included on the list.

The phrase 'don't make list' is incorrect; 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general act of making lists. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. 'Most of the people that' should be 'most of the people who' because 'people' refers to persons and 'who' is the correct relative pronoun. 'What other items that are needed to be filled on the list' is awkward; it should be 'what other items need to be included on the list' for clarity and correctness.

× So it quite depends very on the people and their actions and what they do.

✓ So it quite depends a lot on the people and their actions and what they do.

The phrase 'depends very on' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'depends a lot on'. This is a matter of correct adverbial phrase usage rather than pluralization, but it relates to proper expression.

× I personally prefer making a list on my phone because I don't like to use a pen and a paper to write my list because it is quite time consuming and whenever I take a list on a paper I forgot it easily but in my phone it keeps me a reminder of the list that I needed to do.

✓ I personally prefer making a list on my phone because I don't like to use pen and paper to write my list since it is quite time-consuming, and whenever I take a list on paper, I forget it easily, but on my phone, it keeps me reminded of the list that I need to do.

The phrase 'a pen and a paper' is better as 'pen and paper' because these are uncountable or general items in this context. 'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'Take a list on a paper' should be 'take a list on paper' because 'paper' is uncountable here. 'I forgot it easily' should be 'I forget it easily' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Keeps me a reminder' is incorrect; it should be 'keeps me reminded'. 'That I needed to do' should be 'that I need to do' to maintain present tense.