列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and structured by stating your main point clearly, then supporting it with a reason. Avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete and grammatically correct.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Since I tend to forget things easily, having a list keeps me organised and saves time.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and contains repeated phrases. Make sure to finish your sentences and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making lists is beneficial, using linking words to connect your ideas.

示例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organised. Moreover, making lists is a good habit that improves productivity and reduces stress.

建议: Your answer is quite confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid awkward phrasing and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct.

示例: I think some people don't like making lists because they have routine tasks and prefer to rely on their habits. They might find lists unnecessary since they already know what to do each day.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to make your answer flow better.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because carrying paper is inconvenient nowadays. Since we always have our phones with us, it's easier to access and update my task list anytime.

× I actually do make a list because it's really helpful for me to recall what I actually need and it also very helpful for me as by by starting with a lot of things.

✓ I actually do make a list because it's really helpful for me to recall what I actually need and it is also very helpful for me as by starting with a lot of things.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' before 'also very helpful', which is necessary to form a correct predicate. Without 'is', the phrase is incomplete and grammatically incorrect. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence structure.

× It's very complicated for a person like me who who forgot a lot of things which are.

✓ It's very complicated for a person like me who forgets a lot of things.

The original sentence is incomplete and contains repetition ('who who') and an unfinished clause ('which are'). The corrected sentence removes redundancy and completes the thought by using the present tense verb 'forgets' to match the context.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work and I think it's not only work, it's actually a good habit for each and every person because it helps a person to organize everything at the same time it also it also it also helps to build up a good.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work and I think it's not only for work, it's actually a good habit for each and every person because it helps a person to organize everything. At the same time, it also helps to build up good habits.

The original sentence is repetitive ('it also it also it also') and incomplete ('helps to build up a good'). The correction removes repetition, completes the sentence, and improves clarity by splitting into two sentences.

× I think it depends on person to person because I found a lot of my friends, those who are not actually find it very important in their regular life just because they are stuck with the similar kind of task and they are really love to maintain whatever they are doing in their regular life.

✓ I think it depends from person to person because I have found that a lot of my friends do not actually find it very important in their regular life just because they are stuck with similar kinds of tasks and they really love to maintain whatever they are doing in their regular life.

The phrase 'depends on person to person' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends from person to person'. Also, 'found' should be 'have found' to match present perfect tense. 'Those who are not actually find' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'do not actually find'. 'The similar kind of task' should be plural 'similar kinds of tasks' to match plural context.

× In current situation carrying a paper or a piece of paper is very difficult and annoying at the same time.

✓ In the current situation, carrying a paper or a piece of paper is very difficult and annoying at the same time.

The phrase 'In current situation' is missing the definite article 'the'. The correct phrase is 'In the current situation' to specify the particular situation being referred to.

× So I think as we all carry our phone with us, so just like each and everyone, I think I I also prefer to carry my task list in inside my phone.

✓ So I think, as we all carry our phones with us, just like everyone else, I also prefer to keep my task list inside my phone.

The original sentence has redundancy ('so' twice), repetition ('I I'), and awkward phrasing ('in inside'). The correction removes redundancy, corrects plural 'phones', and improves clarity and fluency.