列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and using more precise vocabulary. For example, instead of 'skip out any necessary item', you could say 'avoid forgetting any necessary items'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' more effectively to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the necessary items, so I don't forget anything important.

建议: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. For example, 'mention down' should be 'write down', and 'needs' should be 'need'. Also, use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas clearly.

示例: Yes, I always write down the essential tasks I need to complete before starting work, so I don't leave anything unfinished, and this method really helps me stay organized.

建议: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more formal and precise language, avoiding filler words like 'so yeah', and structuring sentences better. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'however' to improve coherence.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it tedious to write everything down before starting tasks. However, I believe this habit can be changed with practice.

建议: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting tense consistency ('felt' should be 'feels') and avoiding informal phrases like 'I don't know why but'. Use linking words like 'first' and 'second' properly to organize your points.

示例: I prefer making my lists on paper because it feels more tangible to me. First, I enjoy writing by hand, and second, it's easy to fold the list and carry it in my bag.

× Yes, I always try to make lists before shopping because it gives me an idea to what to shop for and that way I would be able to skip out any necessary item that I have to buy.

✓ Yes, I always try to make lists before shopping because it gives me an idea of what to shop for and that way I would be able to skip any unnecessary item that I have to buy.

The phrase 'skip out any necessary item' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'skip any unnecessary item'. Also, 'idea to what to shop for' should be 'idea of what to shop for' because 'idea' is followed by the preposition 'of'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Yes, I always try to make lists before shopping because it gives me an idea to what to shop for and that way I would be able to skip out any necessary item that I have to buy.

✓ Yes, I always try to make lists before shopping because it gives me an idea of what to shop for and that way I would be able to skip any unnecessary item that I have to buy.

The preposition 'to' after 'idea' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'of'. Also, 'skip out' is not appropriate here; 'skip' alone is correct. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× ...that way I would be able to skip out any necessary item that I have to buy.

✓ ...that way I would be able to skip any unnecessary item that I have to buy.

The word 'necessary' is incorrect here because the meaning is to avoid items that are not needed. The correct word is 'unnecessary'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers (ID 14).

× So yeah, it's very important to mention out things before you buy.

✓ So yeah, it's very important to mention things before you buy.

The phrase 'mention out things' is incorrect. The verb 'mention' does not require the preposition 'out'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× I always try to mention down the essential things that needs to be done.

✓ I always try to write down the essential things that need to be done.

The verb 'needs' does not agree with the plural subject 'things'. It should be 'need'. Also, 'mention down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down'. This is a subject-verb agreement error (ID 27) and incorrect verb usage (ID 26).

× I always try to mention down the essential things that needs to be done.

✓ I always try to write down the essential things that need to be done.

The phrase 'mention down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'write down'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Some people take that as a headache to write down everything before basically doing it.

✓ Some people see it as a headache to write down everything before actually doing it.

The phrase 'take that as a headache' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'see it as a headache'. Also, 'before basically doing it' is better as 'before actually doing it'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× But as I think this particular habit can change.

✓ But I think this particular habit can change.

The phrase 'as I think' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is simply 'I think'. This is an incorrect use of conjunctions/prepositions (ID 16).

× Most of the time I prefer to make my list on paper because it felt more real to me, I enjoy it a lot.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to make my list on paper because it feels more real to me; I enjoy it a lot.

The verb 'felt' is past tense but the sentence is in present tense context. It should be 'feels'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× Most of the time I prefer to make my list on paper because it felt more real to me, I enjoy it a lot.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to make my list on paper because it feels more real to me, and I enjoy it a lot.

The original sentence is a comma splice, joining two independent clauses with a comma. It should be joined with a conjunction like 'and' or separated into two sentences. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26).