列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to make your answer more structured and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors for better clarity.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items. For example, once my mother asked me to buy vegetables for guests, but I forgot. Therefore, making a list helps me remember everything.

建议: Focus on giving a clear and direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve your answer.

示例: I have tried making lists for work, but I often forget to check them. Therefore, I usually prefer to go with the flow instead of relying on lists.

建议: Provide a clearer and more natural explanation. Use linking words to connect your ideas and give specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid awkward phrasing and improve sentence structure.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they believe tasks can be done easily by going with the flow, without strict planning.

建议: Make your answer more fluent and natural by using correct grammar and smoother phrasing. Start with a clear preference, then explain with specific details using linking words.

示例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I use a notepad app. Whenever I have tasks to do, I write them down there for easy access.

× Yes, I am very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go for a shopping because I really forgot the things when for instance my mother told me to bring some vegetables because the guests were coming to our house and I forget so I make a list.

✓ Yes, I am a very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go shopping because I really forget things. For instance, my mother told me to bring some vegetables because guests were coming to our house and I forget, so I make a list.

The phrase 'very clumsy person' needs an article 'a' before 'very clumsy person' to be grammatically correct (Singular and plural issue). Also, 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct form. 'Forgot the things' should be 'forget things' to match the present tense context. The sentence was also split for clarity.

× Yes, I am very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go for a shopping because I really forgot the things when for instance my mother told me to bring some vegetables because the guests were coming to our house and I forget so I make a list.

✓ Yes, I am a very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go shopping because I really forget things. For instance, my mother told me to bring some vegetables because guests were coming to our house and I forgot, so I make a list.

The verb 'forgot' is used correctly in past tense for the event when mother told to bring vegetables, but 'I forget' should be 'I forgot' to maintain past tense consistency in the example.

× Yes, I am very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go for a shopping because I really forgot the things when for instance my mother told me to bring some vegetables because the guests were coming to our house and I forget so I make a list.

✓ Yes, I am a very clumsy person so I make a list whenever I go shopping because I really forget things. For instance, my mother told me to bring some vegetables because guests were coming to our house and I forgot, so I make a list.

The phrase 'go for a shopping' is incorrect; the correct preposition usage is 'go shopping' without 'for a'.

× Honestly telling that I tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm a forgetful so that's why I didn't remember to make a list.

✓ Honestly, I have tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm forgetful, so that's why I don't remember to make a list.

The phrase 'I'm a forgetful' is incorrect because 'forgetful' is an adjective and should not be used with 'a'. Also, tense consistency is needed: 'tried' should be 'have tried' to indicate repeated past action with present relevance, and 'didn't remember' should be 'don't remember' to match the present context.

× Honestly telling that I tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm a forgetful so that's why I didn't remember to make a list.

✓ Honestly, I have tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm forgetful, so that's why I don't remember to make a list.

The sentence had redundant conjunctions 'because' and 'so that's why' used together, which is incorrect. Using 'because' and 'so' together in this way is unnecessary and causes confusion.

× Honestly telling that I tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm a forgetful so that's why I didn't remember to make a list.

✓ Honestly, I have tried many times to make a list but I always forget because I'm forgetful, so that's why I don't remember to make a list.

The pronoun 'I'm a forgetful' is incorrect; 'forgetful' is an adjective and should not be used as a noun with 'a'. The correct form is 'I'm forgetful'.

× So then then I just go with the flow.

✓ So then I just go with the flow.

The repetition of 'then' is incorrect and redundant; only one 'then' is needed.

× I think that the list is not as much crucial for performing the task one can perform easily if one should go with the flow.

✓ I think that the list is not very crucial for performing the task; one can perform easily if one goes with the flow.

The phrase 'as much crucial' is incorrect; 'very crucial' or 'so crucial' is appropriate. Also, 'should go' is incorrect here; simple present 'goes' fits better to express general truth.

× I think that the list is not as much crucial for performing the task one can perform easily if one should go with the flow.

✓ I think that the list is not very crucial for performing the task; one can perform easily if one goes with the flow.

The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly used here to express a general condition. Simple present tense 'goes' is more appropriate for general truths or habitual actions.

× Well, I'll always make a list on my mobile phone. There is a one particular app I am having that name is notepad.

✓ Well, I'll always make a list on my mobile phone. There is one particular app I have called Notepad.

The phrase 'There is a one particular app I am having' is incorrect. 'There is one particular app I have' is correct. Also, 'that name is notepad' should be 'called Notepad'.

× There is a one particular app I am having that name is notepad.

✓ There is one particular app I have called Notepad.

The phrase 'I am having' is incorrect; 'I have' is the correct form to express possession. Also, 'that name is notepad' is incorrect; 'called Notepad' is the correct way to name the app.

× So whenever I receive any task or any kind of work which I have to do so I write that on my list.

✓ So whenever I receive any task or any kind of work that I have to do, I write it on my list.

The sentence is awkward and contains redundant conjunctions 'so'. The relative clause should use 'that' instead of 'which' for defining clauses. Also, 'write that on my list' is better as 'write it on my list' for clarity.