列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating your habit and reason, and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct verb forms and sentence structures.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the market, especially when buying perishable food items. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting important things.

建议: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical mistakes. Be sure to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'tasks' instead of 'tax') and clarify your points with proper sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work to prioritize tasks effectively. For example, I put tasks with earlier deadlines at the top of my list to ensure I complete them on time.

建议: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your ideas more clearly and fully. Use linking words to organize your thoughts and avoid vague phrases. Also, complete your sentences to convey your message effectively.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it stressful to prioritize tasks. They may feel overwhelmed analyzing what needs to be done first, or they might not know how to organize their schedule properly.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and make your answer more concise and natural.

示例: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone. It's more convenient because I always carry my phone, so I don't have to worry about losing a paper list.

× Yes, I always like try to plan my things before going for shopping especially when I'm going to the market where I'm going to get food stuffs such as perishable goods.

✓ Yes, I always like trying to plan my things before going shopping, especially when I'm going to the market where I'm going to get foodstuffs such as perishable goods.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'trying' to indicate an activity one enjoys. Also, 'going for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'going shopping'. Additionally, 'food stuffs' should be one word: 'foodstuffs'. These corrections improve grammatical accuracy and naturalness.

× So I try to make at least before leaving the house so I I'll be able to remember every single thing I had to buy because.

✓ So I try to make a list at least before leaving the house so I'll be able to remember every single thing I have to buy.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'a list' clarifies the object of 'make'. Also, 'I had to buy' is past tense, but the context requires present tense 'I have to buy' because the shopping is upcoming. The phrase 'I I'll' is a typo and corrected to 'I'll'.

× I always make a list for my work, so I should know which tax to prioritize more on my schedule because I have a large workload throughout the week.

✓ I always make a list for my work, so I know which tasks to prioritize more on my schedule because I have a large workload throughout the week.

The word 'tax' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'tasks', which is plural. This correction fixes the singular/plural issue and clarifies meaning.

× So I try to place the the list tags that have to that have a lesser deadline at the bottom.

✓ So I try to place the list tasks that have a nearer deadline at the bottom.

The phrase 'list tags' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'list tasks' fits the context better. Also, 'lesser deadline' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'nearer deadline' or 'earlier deadline' to indicate urgency. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I think some people like making this because it's maybe stressful for them to really analyze what is more important in their schedule or what has to be done or completed early.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like making lists because it may be stressful for them to really analyze what is more important in their schedule or what has to be done or completed early.

The original sentence says 'some people like making this' which contradicts the question about why some people don't like making lists. Changing 'like' to 'don't like' corrects the meaning. Also, 'this' is vague; specifying 'making lists' clarifies the sentence.

× And it kind of like stress them, not give them or maybe they don't know the pattern to follow they even if.

✓ And it kind of stresses them, doesn't help them, or maybe they don't know the pattern to follow even if they try.

The phrase 'kind of like stress them' is incorrect; the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it' as 'stresses'. 'Not give them' is incomplete; 'doesn't help them' is clearer. The sentence was incomplete and unclear, so it was rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Before, I always make a list of my paper bread.

✓ Before, I always made a list on paper.

The phrase 'make a list of my paper bread' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'made a list on paper'. Also, past tense 'made' fits better with 'Before'. 'Paper bread' is a mishearing or typo and corrected to 'paper'.

× As time goes by it feels more better making the list on phone.

✓ As time goes by, it feels better to make the list on my phone.

The phrase 'more better' is incorrect; 'better' is the correct comparative form. Also, 'making the list on phone' is awkward; 'to make the list on my phone' is clearer. Adding a comma after 'As time goes by' improves readability.

× So I often make my list using my phone so I won't have to move around with a piece of paper.

✓ So I often make my list using my phone so I don't have to carry around a piece of paper.

The phrase 'move around with a piece of paper' is awkward; 'carry around' is the correct collocation. Also, 'won't have to' suggests future, but the habitual action is better expressed with 'don't have to'.

× Rather I will just carry my my phone since I use it for communication.

✓ Instead, I just carry my phone since I use it for communication.

The word 'Rather' is incorrectly used here; 'Instead' is the correct conjunction to express preference. Also, 'will just carry' is changed to 'just carry' to indicate habitual action. The repeated word 'my' is corrected.