列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，确保表达自然流畅。可以多使用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I go to the market or bakery because it's easy to forget items. This helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建议: 回答不完整且有重复表达，建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，避免重复和语法错误。

示例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to set my goals for the day. However, sometimes it doesn't work well because unexpected tasks come up.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当（如'autism'），建议使用准确词汇表达观点，并完整回答问题。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because if they can't finish their plans, it makes them feel anxious and stressed.

建议: 回答表达基本清楚，但句子结构较长且有语法错误，建议简化句子并使用连接词使表达更自然。

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I have done it since middle school. I find it useful and have kept this habit until now.

× especially if some items I always will a list of buying taste to glory.

✓ especially if some items, I always make a list to buy them.

这里'some items'是复数，后面表达不清且缺少动词，应该用'make a list to buy them'来表达买东西的意思。原句中'will a list of buying taste to glory'语法错误且无意义。

× Yeah, I will make a list for my work, especially I will make A to do list in one day at the morning because they gave me a goal to determine to determine what to do today.

✓ Yeah, I usually make a list for my work, especially I make a to-do list in the morning because it gives me a goal to determine what to do today.

这里不应该用将来时态'wil make'，因为描述的是习惯动作，应该用一般现在时。'A to do list'应为'a to-do list'，且'gave'应改为' gives'，因为指的是现在的情况。

× But unfortunately it often useless because.

✓ But unfortunately, it is often useless because...

句子缺少系动词'is'，导致句子不完整。'useless'是形容词，需要用系动词连接。

× I think from some people's perspective, making list is a resignation for their lives because if you make the plans, but you don't have time to to, to complete it, it will make you feel anxiety and your autism.

✓ I think from some people's perspective, making a list is a resignation for their lives because if you make plans but don't have time to complete them, it will make you feel anxious and stressed.

句子结构混乱，'making list'应为'making a list'，'the plans'改为'plans'更自然，'to to, to complete it'重复且错误，改为'to complete them'。'feel anxiety and your autism'表达错误，改为'feel anxious and stressed'更合适。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's my habit from a young age in my middle school, I find it useful for me to make A to do list, so I keep it the habit until now.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it's my habit since a young age in middle school. I find it useful to make a to-do list, so I have kept this habit until now.

'from a young age in my middle school'表达不自然，改为'since a young age in middle school'。'make A to do list'应为'make a to-do list'。'keep it the habit'语法错误，改为'have kept this habit'。