列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答时语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，保持句子完整和连贯。

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. I usually write down the items on paper or use my phone to remind myself what to buy.

建议: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且有语法错误，表达不够简洁。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法准确。

示例: Yes, I always make a list for my work. It helps me remember tasks and save time because I plan everything in advance.

建议: 表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱，逻辑连接不够自然。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find tasks too many and unstructured. They think lists are useless since plans often change.

建议: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好，并注意时态和语法一致。

示例: It depends on the task. For work or study, I prefer paper lists because writing helps me focus. For shopping, I use my phone.

× Firstly I would write down what I'm going to buy at this journey down on a paper or just record them in my phone just to remind myself what I'm going to get and in and.

✓ Firstly I would write down what I'm going to buy on this journey down on a paper or just record them in my phone just to remind myself what I'm going to get.

句中“in and”无意义，应删除。此处是动词的现在分词形式错误使用，导致句子不通顺。建议删除多余部分，使句子表达清晰。

× Yeah, I always make a list for my work and if works well, I usually write down what I'm going to do before I start just to remind myself what I'm going to do and avoid forgetting anything and save time when I'm planning the whole tusks together.

✓ Yeah, I always make a list for my work and it works well, I usually write down what I'm going to do before I start just to remind myself what I'm going to do and avoid forgetting anything and save time when I'm planning the whole tasks together.

句中“if works well”应为“it works well”，这是代词使用错误（12号问题）。另外“tusks”应为“tasks”，拼写错误不在本次纠正范围内。

× It just kind of a reminder to me and it works really well.

✓ It is just kind of a reminder to me and it works really well.

句中缺少系动词“is”，导致句子结构不完整（23号问题），但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题，此处补充“is”使句子完整。

× Firstly, it is mainly because some people think that making lists is just a waste of time because tasks are multiple and it is not structured.

✓ Firstly, it is mainly because some people think that making lists is just a waste of time because tasks are many and not structured.

“tasks are multiple”表达不自然，应使用“tasks are many”或“there are multiple tasks”。这里“multiple”作为形容词不能直接用作表数量的谓语，属于量词使用错误（14号问题）。

× It needs change.

✓ It needs to change.

“needs change”表达不完整，正确表达应为“needs to change”，即需要改变。这里是动词搭配错误，属于量词使用错误（14号问题）。

× So make making a list actually does no good for their completion of their goal.

✓ So making a list actually does no good for their completion of their goal.

“make making”重复，应删除“make”。这是句子结构错误（26号问题），但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题，删除多余词语使句子通顺。

× It depends if I'm going to do my work or study.

✓ It depends on if I'm going to do my work or study.

“depends”后应接介词“on”，表示依赖于某事，缺少介词属于介词使用错误（11号问题）。

× I'd rather make a list on paper because it helped me focused and when I was writing.

✓ I'd rather make a list on paper because it helps me focus when I am writing.

“helped me focused”时态和动词形式错误，应为“一般现在时”且“help”后接动词原形“focus”，属于过去时和动词形式错误（5号和8号问题）。

× When I am writing I can also clear my mind of what I'm going to do but when I was doing when I'm going to do my shop.

✓ When I am writing I can also clear my mind of what I'm going to do but when I am going to do my shopping.

句中“when I was doing when I'm going to do my shop”结构混乱，时态不一致，应统一为现在时“when I am going to do my shopping”。“shop”应为“shopping”，这里是动词形式错误（6号问题）和词汇使用错误。