列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is relevant but a bit long and slightly unclear due to missing words and redundancy. Try to make your sentences complete and concise, and avoid repeating ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping, especially for household items. This helps me and my family remember everything we need and avoid forgetting anything.

建议: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and lacks clarity at the end. Try to complete your sentences and use linking words to explain how the list helps you. Avoid redundancy and be more specific.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work to ensure I don't miss any duties. I frequently check the list, which helps me stay organized and complete my tasks on time.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to finish your sentences and provide more specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a sharp memory and prefer to remember their tasks mentally. Also, they might find lists time-consuming or unnecessary.

建议: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences and explain your preference clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I have been writing by hand since childhood. I am not very comfortable using digital devices, so writing on paper makes me feel more confident.

× Yes, I do make a list of things whenever I go for shopping especially for purchasing household items along with my family members because usually forget one or two items to make sure that.

✓ Yes, I do make a list of things whenever I go shopping, especially for purchasing household items along with my family members because we usually forget one or two items, so I make sure of that.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' without 'for'. Also, 'because usually forget one or two items' lacks a subject; adding 'we' clarifies who forgets the items. These corrections address singular/plural and sentence structure issues.

× Yes, I do make a list for my work or professional job just to make sure that I should not miss my duties and responsibilities.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work or professional job just to make sure that I do not miss my duties and responsibilities.

Using 'should not' in this context is incorrect; the correct modal verb usage is 'do not' to express a simple negative present action. 'Should not' implies obligation or advice, which is not intended here.

× And I repeatedly keep checking this list and accordingly I will.

✓ And I repeatedly keep checking this list and act accordingly.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'I will' without completing the thought. Changing it to 'act accordingly' completes the sentence logically and grammatically.

× I think some people probably they don't want to make a list of their worker duties, probably because of their high intelligence or sharp brain, so that they remember everything and.

✓ I think some people probably don't want to make a list of their work duties, probably because of their high intelligence or sharp brains, so that they remember everything.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people probably'. Also, 'worker duties' should be 'work duties'. 'Sharp brain' should be pluralized to 'sharp brains' to match 'people'. The sentence also ends abruptly; removing 'and' completes it properly.

× I prefer to make a list on paper rather than over phone because since childhood I have practice of writing on the paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on the phone because since childhood I have had the practice of writing on paper.

The preposition 'over phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on the phone'. Also, 'have practice' should be 'have had the practice' to indicate experience. 'On the paper' is better as 'on paper' in this context.

× I don't have much practice with digitalization or using gadgets and I feel confident and.

✓ I don't have much practice with digitalization or using gadgets, and I feel confident with paper lists.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and'. Adding 'with paper lists' completes the thought. Also, 'digitalization' is better replaced with 'using digital devices' for clarity, but as per instructions, only grammar issues are corrected.