列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and make your sentences more concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'helps me' twice, you can combine the ideas.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me remember all the essential items and saves time by preventing me from returning to the store for forgotten things.

建议: Your answer addresses the question well, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. Also, use linking words like 'for example' appropriately and avoid minor mistakes to improve clarity.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to help me stay organized and complete tasks systematically. For example, when I have multiple deadlines, my list allows me to prioritise and manage my time efficiently.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Avoid mixing personal opinion with general statements in the same sentence. Also, use correct phrases like 'prefer making lists' instead of 'prefer a making list'.

示例: Some people prefer to rely on their memory instead of making lists. Additionally, they may feel that making lists is unnecessary and time-consuming.

建议: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use consistent verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'say using my phone'. Instead, be specific and concise.

示例: When I was a child, I preferred making lists on paper, but now I use my phone to take notes because it reduces the risk of losing them.

× Yes, I usually make a list for my work to helps me stay organized and a complete task systematically.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work to help me stay organized and complete tasks systematically.

The verb 'helps' is incorrectly used with 'to' and the subject 'I'. After 'to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'helps' should be 'help'. Also, 'a complete task' should be 'complete tasks' to match the plural context.

× For example, when I have a multiple deadlines, my list allows me to prioritize and manage my time efficiently.

✓ For example, when I have multiple deadlines, my list allows me to prioritize and manage my time efficiently.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the plural noun 'multiple deadlines'. 'Multiple' already indicates more than one, so 'a' should be removed.

× Some people don't prefer a making list because I think they prefer to rely on their memory.

✓ Some people don't prefer making a list because I think they prefer to rely on their memory.

The preposition 'a' is incorrectly placed before 'making list'. The correct phrase is 'making a list' without 'a' before 'making'.

× Additionally, they don't feel it is necessary and it is time consuming.

✓ Additionally, they don't feel it is necessary and that it is time-consuming.

The sentence lacks the conjunction 'that' to connect the clauses properly. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× When I was a child, I preferred to make a list on my paper, but after a while I just make a note, say using my phone, which reduce the risk of losing my notes.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred to make a list on paper, but after a while I just made a note, say using my phone, which reduces the risk of losing my notes.

The verb 'make' should be in past tense 'made' to match the past context. Also, 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'which'.