列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Uh, I think it depends on the purpose I shop. If I have to buy many things, I will make a list to be more clear. But if I just want to uh, go shop for for happy, uh, or spend my umm, spare time, I won't make a list.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Or if the work items is really important or too many, I will always make a list to help me to make it clear I think it work.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Uh, I think maybe it's because, uh, some people think making this is a thing to waste their time. If they have this time, they can, uh, use this time directly on their work or other things.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Uh, yes, uh, because, uh, nowadays we are in the smartphone's time, umm, it's really convenient for me to, uh, use my phone to write a list because I can check it anytime if I want to. For example, if I want to buy something, I just.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答时语句不够流畅，有较多的犹豫词（如 uh, umm），且表达不够简洁自然。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意句子结构的完整性。
示例: It depends on why I am shopping. If I need to buy many items, I usually make a list to stay organized. However, if I am shopping just for fun or to pass time, I don't make a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议练习使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并且用连接词使表达更连贯。
示例: If I have many important tasks at work, I always make a list because it helps me stay organized and focused. I think it works well for me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 60.0建议: 回答中有过多的犹豫词，表达不够自然且句子结构松散。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇，并且丰富内容，使观点更具体。
示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to spend that time working or doing other activities directly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 55.0建议: 回答不完整且充满犹豫词，缺乏清晰的结构和具体细节。建议练习完整表达观点，减少口头语，并提供具体例子支持观点。
示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient. I can check my list anytime and easily add or remove items, which helps me stay organized.
语法
× If I have to buy many things, I will make a list to be more clear.
✓ If I have to buy many things, I will make a list to be clearer.
这里的“to be more clear”应改为“to be clearer”，因为“clear”作为形容词的比较级形式是“clearer”，用来表达“更清楚”。
× Or if the work items is really important or too many, I will always make a list to help me to make it clear I think it work.
✓ Or if the work items are really important or too many, I will always make a list to help me to make it clear. I think it works.
“work items”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”；“I think it work”中“work”应为第三人称单数形式“works”，因为主语是“it”。
× I think it work.
✓ I think it works.
主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“works”。
× If I just want to uh, go shop for for happy, uh, or spend my umm, spare time, I won't make a list.
✓ If I just want to, uh, go shopping for fun, uh, or spend my, umm, spare time, I won't make a list.
“go shop for for happy”表达不正确，应改为“go shopping for fun”，其中“go shopping”是固定搭配，表示去购物；“for fun”表示为了娱乐。
× If they have this time, they can, uh, use this time directly on their work or other things.
✓ If they have this time, they can, uh, use this time directly for their work or other things.
动词“use”后面搭配介词应为“for”，表示用途；“use ... on”不符合习惯用法。
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