列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid spelling mistakes and use the correct word 'list' instead of 'last'. Also, make your answer more natural by adding a reason or example. For instance, you can say why you make a list or how it helps you.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list with all the items I want to buy before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything and saves time.

建议: Be careful with word choice and clarity. The phrase 'I don't do less for every task' is unclear. Also, avoid repeating words like 'rather rather'. Try to give a clear and direct answer with supporting details using linking words.

示例: At work, I don't always make a list because it depends on the task. Sometimes I prefer to make a list to stay organized, but other times I work spontaneously if the task is simple.

建议: Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Instead of repeating 'people are different', explain more specifically why some dislike lists. Also, correct 'lasts' to 'lists'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and find lists restrictive, while others enjoy the structure lists provide.

建议: Use correct expressions like 'either way' instead of 'either ways'. Also, clarify your answer by explaining why you don't mind and how you access both. Use linking words for coherence.

示例: I don't mind either way because I can access both my phone and paper lists easily, so it depends on the situation.

× Yes, I usually make a last with all the items that I want to buy before I go to the shop.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list with all the items that I want to buy before I go to the shop.

The word 'last' is incorrect here; the correct singular noun is 'list'. This is a singular and plural issue because 'last' is not the correct form. The correct word is 'list' which refers to a collection of items.

× At work I don't do less for every task.

✓ At work I don't do lists for every task.

The phrase 'do less' is incorrect in this context. The student likely meant 'do lists'. 'Less' is a quantifier used with uncountable nouns, but here the countable noun 'lists' is appropriate. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers.

× Sometimes I prefer to do a list and in some instances I would prefer to go random rather rather than doing a list.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to make a list and in some instances I would prefer to go random rather than making a list.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'list'; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'rather rather' is a repetition error, corrected to a single 'rather'. This is a singular and plural issue and verb usage issue.

× Some people's prefer making lasts while others do not like it.

✓ Some people prefer making lists while others do not like it.

'People's' is possessive and incorrect here; the plural noun 'people' is correct. Also, 'lasts' is incorrect; the plural of 'list' is 'lists'. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I don't mind either ways, both are fine with me because I can't access both of them at any time.

✓ I don't mind either way, both are fine with me because I can access both of them at any time.

The phrase 'either ways' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'either way'. Also, 'can't access' contradicts the meaning; it should be 'can access'. This is an incorrect use of quantifiers and modal verb usage.