列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it saves time since I can shop more efficiently without forgetting items.

建议: Your answer has some unclear expressions and grammar mistakes. Avoid vague comparisons like 'works out like a teacher.' Instead, clearly explain how the list helps you. Use linking words to connect your points.

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For example, it guides me to follow my schedule and work more efficiently, which improves my productivity.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammar errors and redundancy. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain reasons logically.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel stressed. For instance, seeing many tasks on a list can make them worry about not finishing everything.

建议: Your answer is relevant but contains grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use complete sentences and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'mobile phone is a great.'

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient; I can access it anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be inconvenient if I don't have a pen or paper with me.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop because I'm making lists help me to prevent me from forgetting something I need and it also help me save the time when I'm in the shop.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop because making lists helps me prevent forgetting something I need and it also helps me save time when I'm in the shop.

The phrase 'I'm making lists help me' incorrectly uses the present continuous tense and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'Making lists' should be a gerund phrase acting as the subject, so the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular). Also, 'help me to prevent me' is redundant; 'help me prevent' is correct. 'Help me save the time' should be 'helps me save time' without 'the'.

× It also help me save the time when I'm in the shop.

✓ It also helps me save time when I'm in the shop.

The subject 'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help'. Also, 'the time' is unnecessary; 'save time' is the correct phrase.

× It's really useful and it's a high effectiveness.

✓ It's really useful and highly effective.

'High effectiveness' is a noun phrase that is awkward here. The adjective 'highly effective' is the correct form to describe usefulness. Also, 'it's a high effectiveness' is incorrect because 'effectiveness' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Use an adjective instead.

× It will guide me to do everything I need in the schedule.

✓ It guides me to do everything I need in the schedule.

'It' refers to the list, which is a habitual action, so present simple 'guides' is appropriate instead of 'will guide'. Also, 'in the schedule' is acceptable but could be improved to 'according to the schedule'.

× It also help me find an effective way to work more hard.

✓ It also helps me find an effective way to work harder.

'It' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'helps'. 'Work more hard' is incorrect; the comparative adverb 'harder' should be used instead of 'more hard'.

× Because some people feel stressed when they are making this, the lists help make them feel something they cannot finish.

✓ Because some people feel stressed when they make lists, the lists make them feel like there is something they cannot finish.

The phrase 'when they are making this' is awkward; 'when they make lists' is clearer. Also, 'help make them feel something they cannot finish' is confusing; it should be 'make them feel like there is something they cannot finish'. The verb 'help' is unnecessary here.

× It's it's really stressful for them to do this.

✓ It's really stressful for them to do this.

The repetition 'It's it's' is a typographical error. Only one 'It's' is needed.

× I prefer make a list on my phone because it is much more convenient for me to get the list anytime.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is much more convenient for me to access the list anytime.

'Prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, 'get the list' is better expressed as 'access the list' in this context.

× Sometimes when I cannot find a paper without a pen so I cannot finish the list.

✓ Sometimes I cannot find paper or a pen, so I cannot finish the list.

'A paper' is incorrect; 'paper' is uncountable here. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; removing 'when' and restructuring improves clarity.

× Additionally, mobile phone is a great.

✓ Additionally, a mobile phone is great.

'Mobile phone' needs an article 'a' before it. Also, 'is a great' is incomplete; 'great' is an adjective and does not need 'a'.