列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，例如“make this”应为“make a list”，且最后一句话未完整表达。建议注意句子完整性和准确用词，避免句子中断。

示例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need. For example, last week I wrote down fruits, vegetables, and some snacks to buy.

建议: 回答中“make this”应改为“make a list”，且存在语法错误如“It save time”应为“It saves time”。建议加强语法准确性和用词规范。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. It saves time and ensures I complete my tasks on schedule.

建议: 回答表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误，如“making this”应为“making lists”，“prefer to buy to do things”表达混乱。建议理清句子结构，使用准确表达。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's a waste of time. They prefer to do things spontaneously and believe lists limit their creativity.

建议: 回答中“make this”应为“make a list”，且存在重复表达“very convenient”和语法错误“write down it”。建议避免重复，注意语法准确。

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and portable. I can easily add items anytime by opening my phone and typing them in.

× Last week I made a lot of things I need to buy like fruit, vegetables and.

✓ Last week I made a list of a lot of things I needed to buy like fruit and vegetables.

这里“made a lot of things”用法不当，应该是“made a list of a lot of things”，表示制作购物清单。并且“need”应改为过去时“needed”，因为是描述过去的事情。水果和蔬菜前的“and”后面不应有逗号。

× Does it work? Yes. I really make this for my work because it's very convenient and it's also a good way to remember what I need to do. It save time and I can finish my work on time.

✓ Does it work? Yes. I really make this for my work because it's very convenient and it's also a good way to remember what I need to do. It saves time and I can finish my work on time.

主语是单数“It”，动词“save”应加-s变为“saves”，这是第三人称单数动词形式的要求。

× There are various Some people think making this is a waste of time and they prefer to buy to do things by their heart.

✓ There are various reasons. Some people think making lists is a waste of time and they prefer to do things by their heart.

句子结构混乱，“There are various”后缺少名词，且“prefer to buy to do things”表达错误，应为“prefer to do things”。需要拆分成两个句子以表达清楚。

× What's more, others people think making lists is limited their ability and they really do things by their hearts.

✓ What's more, other people think making lists limits their ability and they really do things by their hearts.

“others people”应为“other people”，且“is limited their ability”语法错误，应为“limits their ability”，主语是单数“making lists”，动词用第三人称单数形式。

× I prefer to make this on my cell phone because it's very convenient and portable. I can take it everywhere when I need to add some things. It's very convenient and I I just need to open my cell phone and write down it.

✓ I prefer to make my list on my cell phone because it's very convenient and portable. I can take it everywhere when I need to add some things. It's very convenient and I just need to open my cell phone and write it down.

“make this”不明确，应改为“make my list”。“write down it”语序错误，应为“write it down”。此外，“I I”重复，应删除一个。