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Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Actually, I don't make a shopping list when I go for a clothes shopping, but I prefer making a shopping list for the times when I go to market so that I won't forget anything that I need to buy that day. I think shopping lists are very functional for the times that you need to buy multiple things but.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yeah, I have a very busy daily life, so at the times that when I don't make a checklist, I forgot nearly half of my duties. So it's very helpful for me to make a list for my work. Also, checking the boxes for the things that I have done makes me feel good and it feels that I've got.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think that this question has a very basic answer and some people don't need to make lists as they are very good at remembering their duties and tasks and they don't forget anything that they they need to do regularly. And I think another answer might be that some people have a chaotic organization style.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Even though we're in the technology age, I prefer doing things the old way. I usually write down my tasks or responsibilities for the day from computer and get them hard copied and this way I never lose this paper and it becomes more accessible for me as I can easily reach it.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak cümleniz biraz uzun ve karmaşık. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanarak ifadelerinizi güçlendirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları daha etkili kullanarak cevaplarınızı daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.
示例: I usually don't make a list when shopping for clothes. However, when I go to the market, I prefer making a list to avoid forgetting anything. Shopping lists are very useful when buying many items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 70.0建议: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha açık ifadelerle cevaplarınızı geliştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları kullanarak cümlelerinizin akışını iyileştirin.
示例: I have a busy daily life, so when I don't make a checklist, I forget many tasks. Therefore, making a list helps me stay organized. Also, ticking completed tasks gives me a sense of achievement.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 65.0建议: Cevabınızda tekrar eden ifadeler ve biraz dağınık yapı var. Daha net ve öz cümleler kurarak, fikirlerinizi daha etkili ifade edebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları kullanarak cümleler arasında daha iyi bağlantı kurabilirsiniz.
示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and rarely forget tasks. Others may avoid lists due to a chaotic way of organizing their work.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 70.0建议: Cevabınızda bazı ifadeler karışık ve uzun. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurarak, düşüncelerinizi daha iyi aktarabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları kullanarak cümlelerinizin akıcılığını artırabilirsiniz.
示例: Although technology is common, I prefer writing lists on paper. I print my tasks from the computer and keep the paper with me. This way, I never lose my list and can access it easily.
语法
× Actually, I don't make a shopping list when I go for a clothes shopping, but I prefer making a shopping list for the times when I go to market so that I won't forget anything that I need to buy that day.
✓ Actually, I don't make a shopping list when I go clothes shopping, but I prefer making a shopping list for the times when I go to the market so that I won't forget anything that I need to buy that day.
The phrase 'go for a clothes shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go clothes shopping' without 'for a'. Also, 'go to market' should be 'go to the market' because 'market' here is a specific place requiring the definite article 'the'.
× I think shopping lists are very functional for the times that you need to buy multiple things but.
✓ I think shopping lists are very functional for the times when you need to buy multiple things.
The sentence ends abruptly with 'but' which is a conjunction expecting a following clause. Removing 'but' completes the sentence properly.
× So at the times that when I don't make a checklist, I forgot nearly half of my duties.
✓ So at the times when I don't make a checklist, I forget nearly half of my duties.
The sentence mixes present tense 'don't make' with past tense 'forgot'. To maintain tense consistency, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context.
× I usually write down my tasks or responsibilities for the day from computer and get them hard copied and this way I never lose this paper and it becomes more accessible for me as I can easily reach it.
✓ I usually write down my tasks or responsibilities for the day from the computer and get them hard copied, and this way I never lose this paper and it becomes more accessible for me as I can easily reach it.
The phrase 'from computer' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'computer'. Also, a comma is added before 'and' to separate clauses properly.
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