列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“when I shopping”应为“when I am shopping”，以及“I afraid”应为“I am afraid”。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致，回答时尽量简洁自然，避免重复表达。

示例: Sometimes I make a list when I go shopping because I am afraid of forgetting important items. This helps me buy everything I need correctly and efficiently.

建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“submit to the to my school devices”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

示例: Yes, I make a list for my homework and set deadlines for each task. This helps me complete my assignments more efficiently and submit them on time.

建议: 回答中语法和表达不准确，如“making this is a bit troubled”应为“making lists is a bit troublesome”，且表达不够连贯。建议多使用连接词，理清逻辑，避免口语填充词。

示例: I think some people find making lists troublesome because they have to write everything down before acting. They prefer to shop freely, even though it might waste more time.

建议: 回答不完整且有语法错误，如“on my”应为“on my phone”，且句子结构混乱。建议完整表达观点，注意句子完整性和语法准确。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can carry it anywhere, easily update my list, and check it conveniently while shopping.

× Sometimes I will make a list when I shopping because when I have a lot of things to buy, I afraid that I will forget what I need to buy and make sure I buy the things correctly.

✓ Sometimes I will make a list when I am shopping because when I have a lot of things to buy, I am afraid that I will forget what I need to buy and make sure I buy the things correctly.

动词后面缺少正确的现在分词形式，'shopping'前应加助动词'am'构成现在进行时，表示正在进行的动作。

× Sometimes I will make a list when I shopping because when I have a lot of things to buy, I afraid that I will forget what I need to buy and make sure I buy the things correctly.

✓ Sometimes I will make a list when I am shopping because when I have a lot of things to buy, I am afraid that I will forget what I need to buy and make sure I buy the things correctly.

缺少系动词'am'，导致表达不完整，'I afraid'应为'I am afraid'，表示“我害怕”。

× Yes, I will make a list for my homework and set the deadline when I need to finish it and submit to the to my school devices.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my homework and set the deadline when I need to finish it and submit it to my school devices.

动词'submit'后缺少宾语，需加上'it'，使句子完整。

× Yes, I will make a list for my homework and set the deadline when I need to finish it and submit to the to my school devices.

✓ Yes, I will make a list for my homework and set the deadline when I need to finish it and submit it to my school devices.

多余的介词'to the'应删除，'submit to the to my school devices'结构错误，应为'submit it to my school devices'。

× And I think make a list can help me to do the homework more efficiently.

✓ And I think making a list can help me do the homework more efficiently.

动名词作主语时应使用'making'，且'do the homework'中不需要' to'，保持句子结构正确。

× I think these people, uh, think making this is a bit troubled and they need to write down all the things before they do the action and they just freedomly to buy the things and uh, it wastes them a lot of time to do it.

✓ I think these people, uh, think making lists is a bit troublesome and they need to write down all the things before they take action, but they just freely buy the things and, uh, it wastes a lot of their time to do it.

'making this'应为'making lists'，'troubled'应为形容词'troublesome'，'freedomly'错误，应为'adverb freely'，'do the action'表达不自然，改为'take action'更合适。

× I would prefer making a list on my because I can bring my outside and I can correct my list as soon as possible and it is very convenient for me to check on my list on my mobile phone and I can umm.

✓ I would prefer making a list on my phone because I can bring it outside and I can correct my list as soon as possible. It is very convenient for me to check my list on my mobile phone.

缺少名词'phone'，'bring my outside'应为'bring it outside'，句子过长且结构混乱，需拆分成更清晰的句子。