列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih natural dan efektif. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih singkat dan jelas, serta hindari pengulangan kata yang tidak perlu.

示例: Sometimes I make a shopping list before I go to the store, but other times I just remember what I need. Making a list helps me save time while shopping.

建议: Perbaiki penggunaan tata bahasa dan tambahkan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan jelas.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before starting work because it helps me prioritize tasks effectively.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide secara logis.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it feels like extra work to write everything down. However, once the list is made, it can really help organize tasks.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan buat kalimat lebih natural dengan menghilangkan kata-kata yang tidak perlu dan memperjelas alasan preferensi.

示例: I don't mind using either paper or my phone for lists, but I prefer writing on paper because I enjoy the feeling of writing by hand.

× Sometimes I do make made list for before to go to shop or sometimes I just go by like I remember the list but not physically exist list.

✓ Sometimes I do make a list before going to the shop or sometimes I just go by remembering the list but not having a physical list.

The phrase 'do make made list for before to go to shop' contains incorrect verb forms and word order. 'Made' is the past tense of 'make' and is redundant here. 'For before to go to shop' is incorrect preposition and infinitive usage. The correct form is 'make a list before going to the shop'. Also, 'physically exist list' is incorrect; it should be 'having a physical list'. Kesalahan ini terjadi karena penggunaan bentuk kata kerja yang salah dan urutan kata yang tidak tepat. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat menjadi lebih alami dan sesuai tata bahasa Inggris.

× Sometimes I do make made list for before to go to shop or sometimes I just go by like I remember the list but not physically exist list.

✓ Sometimes I do make a list before going to the shop or sometimes I just go by remembering the list but not having a physical list.

The phrase 'made list' lacks an article before 'list'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' before 'list' corrects this. Kesalahan ini karena kurangnya artikel sebelum kata benda tunggal yang dapat dihitung. Penambahan artikel membuat kalimat menjadi benar secara tata bahasa.

× Sometimes I do make made list for before to go to shop or sometimes I just go by like I remember the list but not physically exist list.

✓ Sometimes I do make a list before going to the shop or sometimes I just go by remembering the list but not having a physical list.

The phrase 'for before to go to shop' uses incorrect prepositions and infinitive form. The correct preposition is 'before' followed by a gerund 'going'. Also, 'to shop' should be 'to the shop' to specify the place. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi dan bentuk infinitif yang salah. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat menjadi lebih tepat dan alami.

× Yes, in work I usually set up my list before I work because it helps me to like sort the which one I have to do first.

✓ Yes, at work I usually set up my list before I start working because it helps me to sort which tasks I have to do first.

The phrase 'in work' should be 'at work' to indicate location. Also, 'set up my list before I work' is awkward; 'before I start working' is clearer. 'Sort the which one' is incorrect; it should be 'sort which tasks'. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi yang salah dan struktur kalimat yang kurang tepat. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat lebih jelas dan sesuai tata bahasa.

× Yes, in work I usually set up my list before I work because it helps me to like sort the which one I have to do first.

✓ Yes, at work I usually set up my list before I start working because it helps me to sort which tasks I have to do first.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to 'work' as a location or context; 'at work' is the correct phrase. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi yang salah. 'At work' adalah frasa yang benar untuk menunjukkan lokasi atau konteks pekerjaan.

× I think that's because when before you you're making a list, you need to have some works that needed to be on the list.

✓ I think that's because when you're making a list, you need to have some work that needs to be on the list.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context. Also, 'needed' should be 'needs' to agree with 'work'. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan kata benda yang salah dan ketidaksesuaian antara subjek dan kata kerja. 'Work' sebagai kata benda tidak dapat dihitung dan harus menggunakan bentuk tunggal.

× I think that's because when before you you're making a list, you need to have some works that needed to be on the list.

✓ I think that's because when you're making a list, you need to have some work that needs to be on the list.

The phrase 'needed to be' is past tense but the sentence context requires present tense 'needs to be' to indicate general truth. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan bentuk waktu lampau yang tidak sesuai dengan konteks kalimat yang bersifat umum atau kebiasaan.

× So it's kind of like a lot of work, but when you once you have the list, it will help you a lot on the work.

✓ So it's kind of like a lot of work, but once you have the list, it will help you a lot with the work.

The phrase 'when you once you have the list' is redundant; 'once you have the list' is sufficient. Also, 'help you a lot on the work' should be 'help you a lot with the work'. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan konjungsi yang berlebihan dan preposisi yang salah. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat lebih jelas dan benar secara tata bahasa.

× So it's kind of like a lot of work, but when you once you have the list, it will help you a lot on the work.

✓ So it's kind of like a lot of work, but once you have the list, it will help you a lot with the work.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect in this context; 'help with' is the correct collocation. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi yang salah. 'Help with' adalah frasa yang benar untuk menyatakan bantuan terhadap sesuatu.

× I think it's not. I don't mind if I use on the paper or on the phone because it just worked the same.

✓ I think it doesn't matter. I don't mind if I use paper or my phone because it just works the same.

The phrase 'I think it's not' is unclear; 'I think it doesn't matter' is clearer. 'Use on the paper or on the phone' is incorrect; it should be 'use paper or my phone'. Also, 'worked' should be 'works' to match present tense. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan pronomina dan bentuk kata kerja yang salah serta kalimat yang tidak jelas. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat lebih alami dan benar.

× I think it's not. I don't mind if I use on the paper or on the phone because it just worked the same.

✓ I think it doesn't matter. I don't mind if I use paper or my phone because it just works the same.

The verb 'worked' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'works' to indicate a general truth. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan bentuk waktu lampau yang tidak sesuai dengan konteks kalimat yang bersifat umum.

× I think it's not. I don't mind if I use on the paper or on the phone because it just worked the same.

✓ I think it doesn't matter. I don't mind if I use paper or my phone because it just works the same.

The prepositions 'on the paper' and 'on the phone' are incorrect here; the correct usage is 'use paper' and 'use my phone'. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan preposisi yang tidak tepat. Dalam konteks ini, tidak perlu menggunakan preposisi 'on'.

× However, I prefer to write it on paper because I think I like to write better on.

✓ However, I prefer to write on paper because I think I write better that way.

The phrase 'I prefer to write it on paper' is awkward; 'write on paper' is sufficient. 'I like to write better on' is incomplete; it should be 'I write better that way'. Kesalahan ini karena penggunaan pronomina dan struktur kalimat yang tidak lengkap. Perbaikan ini membuat kalimat lebih jelas dan alami.