列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, I like to make a list before I go shopping to ensure I don't get something that I want to buy. And I usually use shopping apps to keep track of my list in black and white. It helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse shopping.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, I'd like to make a list before I start working to ensure that I don't forget something I must do. I usually use the memorandum to keep track of my list in black and white. It can help me save me more time and.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Some people dislike making lists because they want to do their works in freedom. Additionally, they might feel that make lists can cause unnecessary pressure or stresses unconsciously.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because I think it's more conveniently and helps help saves me more time. I usually use the memorandum and apps to keep track of my list.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: 你的回答有些重复，比如“ensure I don't get something that I want to buy”表达不清晰，建议用更准确的表达来说明避免买错东西。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅，避免冗余。
示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out to avoid buying unnecessary items. I usually use shopping apps to keep my list organized, which helps me stick to my budget and prevent impulse purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 65.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“save me more time and”未完成句子。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，同时用更自然的表达方式。
示例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting work to make sure I don't forget any important tasks. I use a memo app to keep everything clear and organized, which helps me manage my time more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 70.0建议: 回答中有语法错误，如“do their works”应为“do their work”，“make lists”应为“making lists”。建议注意动词形式和单复数的正确使用，同时表达更自然。
示例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work freely without restrictions. Also, they may feel that making lists adds unnecessary pressure or stress without realizing it.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 68.0建议: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“helps help saves me more time”。建议简化句子，注意语法和词汇的准确使用，使表达更流畅。
示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and saves me time. I usually use memo apps to keep my lists organized and easy to access.
语法
× Some people dislike making lists because they want to do their works in freedom.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they want to do their work in freedom.
“work”作为不可数名词，表示工作或任务时不加复数形式。这里用“works”是不正确的，应改为“work”。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because I think it's more conveniently and helps help saves me more time.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I think it's more convenient and helps save me more time.
“conveniently”是副词，修饰动词；这里需要形容词“convenient”来修饰“it”。“helps help saves”中“help”多余，应去掉，且“saves”应改为“save”与“helps”并列。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because I think it's more conveniently and helps help saves me more time.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I think it's more convenient and helps save me more time.
“on the paper”中的“the”不必要，通常说“on paper”表示用纸张。去掉“the”更自然。
× I usually use the memorandum to keep track of my list in black and white. It can help me save me more time and.
✓ I usually use the memorandum to keep track of my list in black and white. It can help me save more time.
句子末尾“and”后无内容，造成句子不完整，应去掉“and”。此外，“help me save me”中“me”重复，应去掉一个。
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