列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is good but you need to make it more natural and clear. Avoid repeating the word 'budget' and complete your last sentence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me manage my expenses. For example, by listing what I need, I avoid buying unnecessary items. This way, I can stick to my budget and save money.

建议: Your answer is understandable but it lacks clarity and has some grammar mistakes. Try to organize your ideas better and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your points. Also, avoid repeating the same words and check your sentence structure.

示例: Yes, I always make a detailed list for my work schedule because it helps me stay organized. For instance, I note the time I should start work and the tasks I need to complete. This method works well for me and improves my productivity.

建议: Your answer is a bit confusing and incomplete. Try to be more specific and clear about why some people dislike making lists. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unfinished sentences.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous. For example, they might choose their clothes or activities on the spot instead of planning ahead. This way, they feel more relaxed and flexible.

建议: Your answer has good ideas but needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'get some goose'. Use linking words to explain your preferences better.

示例: It depends on the situation. When I go shopping, I prefer writing my list on paper because it's easier to check. However, for work, I use my phone since it's always with me and I can quickly see my tasks.

× When going to market to purchase any products, I do make a comprehensive list of what I need to buy.

✓ When I go to the market to purchase any products, I do make a comprehensive list of what I need to buy.

The phrase 'When going to market' lacks a subject and proper verb form. It should be 'When I go to the market' to correctly indicate the action and subject. Using the present participle 'going' here is incorrect because the sentence requires a full clause with subject and verb.

× Making this budget for me helps me to budget myself in order not to make much expenses.

✓ Making this budget helps me to budget myself in order not to make many expenses.

The verb 'helps' correctly agrees with the singular subject 'Making this budget'. However, 'much expenses' is incorrect because 'expenses' is countable, so 'many expenses' should be used instead.

× It also help me to know.

✓ It also helps me to know.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number.

× Absolutely yes I make a detailed list of how I want my work schedule to be and it's yes it's working for me because on daily I have list of when to go to work and what to where to the work.

✓ Absolutely yes, I make a detailed list of how I want my work schedule to be, and yes, it's working for me because daily I have a list of when to go to work and what to wear to work.

The original sentence is run-on and contains awkward phrasing. Adding commas improves clarity. 'On daily' is incorrect; 'daily' alone suffices. 'What to where to the work' is incorrect; it should be 'what to wear to work'. Also, 'I have list' needs the article 'a' before 'list'.

× So I make a more detailed list on how my working schedule would look like.

✓ So I make a more detailed list of how my working schedule would look like.

The correct preposition to use with 'list' in this context is 'of', not 'on'. 'List of' is the standard collocation.

× Some people are programmed in a way that they can wake up anytime and choose what they want to wear at any particular time, while others are programmed in the way we are.

✓ Some people are programmed in a way that they can wake up anytime and choose what they want to wear at any particular time, while others are programmed the way we are.

The phrase 'programmed in the way we are' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'programmed the way we are'.

× They only make a detailed list ahead of time.

✓ They only make a detailed list ahead of time.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× So I would say some that.

✓ So I would say some do that.

The phrase 'some that' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'some do that' to complete the thought properly.

× If I'm going to market to get some goose, I prefer making a detailed list on paper.

✓ If I'm going to the market to get some goose, I prefer making a detailed list on paper.

The phrase 'going to market' requires the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct: 'going to the market'.

× But if I'm going to work, I prefer making my list on my phone because my smartphone is always in my hands and I take look at it at every time where I glance and know what.

✓ But if I'm going to work, I prefer making my list on my phone because my smartphone is always in my hand and I take a look at it every time I glance and know what to do.

'In my hands' should be 'in my hand' as usually one hand holds the phone. 'I take look' is missing the article 'a' and should be 'I take a look'. 'At every time where I glance' is awkward; 'every time I glance' is better. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion for clarity.