列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'yeah' to make your answer sound more natural and confident. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'it reduce' to 'it reduces'. Use linking words like 'because' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

示例: Yes, absolutely. I make a list when I shop because it helps me stay focused and prevents me from wandering aimlessly around the market. As a result, I save time and shop more efficiently.

建议: Avoid past tense 'did make' when talking about habitual actions; use present simple instead. Remove filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'therefore' to improve coherence. Also, correct 'did works' to 'does work'.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me concentrate better and increases my efficiency. Therefore, it works well for me.

建议: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'I guess'. Use linking words such as 'because' to explain reasons logically. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'is none of use' to 'it is of no use'.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they know they might not always follow them, especially when new tasks come up. Therefore, they feel that making a list is of no use to them.

建议: Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases like 'And next I think'. Use correct prepositions such as 'on my phone' instead of 'in my phone'. Also, improve sentence structure and coherence by using linking words like 'because' and 'so'.

示例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because nowadays people usually carry their phones with them, unlike paper lists which can be easily lost. So, using my phone is more convenient.

× Yeah, well, absolutely. Umm, I think it can make you not too aimless, just wander around the the market.

✓ Yeah, well, absolutely. Umm, I think it can make you not too aimless, just wander around the market.

The phrase 'the the market' contains a repeated definite article 'the'. This is a typographical error rather than a grammatical issue, but it affects sentence clarity. Removing the duplicate 'the' corrects the sentence.

× Yeah, instead you will be very clear about what you want and it reduce the time and be efficient.

✓ Yeah, instead you will be very clear about what you want and it reduces the time and is efficient.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'reduces' instead of 'reduce'. Also, 'be efficient' should be 'is efficient' to maintain correct verb agreement and sentence structure.

× Well, personally, I did make a list for my work.

✓ Well, personally, I make a list for my work.

The question is about a habitual action, so the present tense 'make' is more appropriate than the past tense 'did make'. Using present tense indicates a regular habit.

× I think it's mainly because I can be more concentrated to my work and I will have more efficiency when doing this.

✓ I think it's mainly because I can concentrate more on my work and I will be more efficient when doing this.

The verb 'concentrate' is used with the preposition 'on', not 'to'. Also, 'more concentrated' is incorrect here; 'concentrate more' is the correct form. 'Have more efficiency' is better expressed as 'be more efficient'.

× And as a result, it did works for me.

✓ And as a result, it did work for me.

After the auxiliary verb 'did', the main verb should be in the base form without 's'. Therefore, 'works' should be 'work'.

× Yeah, so is none of use for them.

✓ Yeah, so it is of no use to them.

The phrase 'none of use' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'of no use'. Also, 'is' needs a subject, so 'it is' is appropriate. 'For them' should be 'to them' to correctly express the idea.

× Well for me I think I will choose make a list in my phone because nowadays people usually take phones with themselves instead of a paper so it's hard to get lost of it.

✓ Well, for me, I think I will choose to make a list on my phone because nowadays people usually take their phones with them instead of paper, so it's hard to lose it.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'choose to make'. The preposition with 'phone' is 'on' not 'in'. 'Take phones with themselves' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take their phones with them'. 'Instead of a paper' should be 'instead of paper' (no article). 'Hard to get lost of it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hard to lose it'.