列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is understandable but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise. For example, instead of "I usually don't make a list when I stop," say "I usually don't make a list when I shop."

示例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I remember the household and personal items I need. I find it more convenient to keep these items in mind rather than writing them down.

建议: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical mistakes. Use simpler and clearer sentences. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, use "because" or "so" to explain why you make lists.

示例: Sometimes, when I have a lot of work, I make a list because it helps me keep track of my tasks. I complete each task by checking the list. However, I usually don't make lists.

建议: Your answer is too long and has unclear parts. Try to organize your ideas better and use correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to explain reasons clearly. Avoid repeating similar ideas.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient to write things down on paper and carry it around. They may also feel bothered to check the list frequently.

建议: Your answer is good but a bit wordy and has some grammar mistakes. Try to make your sentences shorter and clearer. Use linking words like "because" to explain your preference.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It is more convenient than writing on paper and carrying it around.

× Well, in my opinion I think that some people don't find it convenient making list because they need to write the things down in the paper and carry that paper with themselves looking at every moment that what they need to do or some need to something buy from that list.

✓ Well, in my opinion I think that some people don't find it convenient to make a list because they need to write the things down on paper and carry that paper with them, looking at it every moment to see what they need to do or buy from that list.

The phrase 'making list' is incorrect because after 'find it convenient', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make'. Also, 'in the paper' should be 'on paper' as the correct preposition for writing surfaces is 'on'. 'Carry that paper with themselves' is awkward; 'carry that paper with them' is correct. The sentence structure is improved for clarity and correctness.

× Well, in my opinion I think that some people don't find it convenient making list because they need to write the things down in the paper and carry that paper with themselves looking at every moment that what they need to do or some need to something buy from that list.

✓ Well, in my opinion I think that some people don't find it convenient to make a list because they need to write the things down on paper and carry that paper with them, looking at it every moment to see what they need to do or buy from that list.

The preposition 'in' is incorrectly used with 'the paper'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to writing on a surface. Also, 'carry that paper with themselves' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun is unnecessary here, and 'with them' is correct.

× Sometimes when there are lots of work, I prefer making a list and writing down the things that I need to work on and side by side completing all the tasks by just looking at the list.

✓ Sometimes when there is a lot of work, I prefer to make a list and write down the things that I need to work on and, side by side, complete all the tasks by just looking at the list.

After 'prefer', the verb should be in the infinitive form 'to make' rather than the gerund 'making'. Also, 'lots of work' is uncountable, so 'a lot of work' is correct. The verbs 'writing' and 'completing' should be parallel in form with 'write' and 'complete' to maintain consistency.

× Sometimes when there are lots of work, I prefer making a list and writing down the things that I need to work on and side by side completing all the tasks by just looking at the list.

✓ Sometimes when there is a lot of work, I prefer to make a list and write down the things that I need to work on and, side by side, complete all the tasks by just looking at the list.

'Work' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'lots of' which is for countable nouns. The correct phrase is 'a lot of work' or 'much work'. Also, 'there are' should be 'there is' to agree with the singular uncountable noun 'work'.

× Well, I usually don't make a list when I stop because I know the household items, my personal items or any other groceries that I need to buy.

✓ Well, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I know the household items, my personal items, or any other groceries that I need to buy.

The word 'stop' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'shop' when referring to buying groceries. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it improves clarity.

× And also I think it is really inconvenient to make a list rather than it's better to keep in the mind that the things that I need to buy.

✓ And also, I think it is really inconvenient to make a list; rather, it's better to keep in mind the things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'keep in the mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep in mind'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding punctuation and removing unnecessary words for clarity.

× Sometimes when there are lots of work, I prefer making a list and writing down the things that I need to work on and side by side completing all the tasks by just looking at the list. But mostly I don't make.

✓ Sometimes when there is a lot of work, I prefer to make a list and write down the things that I need to work on and, side by side, complete all the tasks by just looking at the list. But mostly, I don't make one.

The sentence 'But mostly I don't make.' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'one' clarifies that the speaker mostly does not make a list. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× Oh, that's a really interesting question. I prefer to make a list in my phone because I carry my phone always with me and instead of writing down things in the paper and carrying that paper in the pocket and looking at every second.

✓ Oh, that's a really interesting question. I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always carry my phone with me instead of writing things down on paper, carrying that paper in my pocket, and looking at it every second.

The correct preposition for electronic devices is 'on' (make a list on my phone). Also, 'in the paper' should be 'on paper'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.