列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了个人观点，但语法和时态使用不准确，且句子较长且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致，并避免冗余。

示例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I find shopping relaxing. I prefer to walk around the supermarket and choose whatever I like without any pressure.

建议: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用完整句子，注意动词形式和句子连贯性，同时避免口语填充词。

示例: Yes, I definitely make lists for my work or study. They help me stay organized and focus on tasks without wasting time on my phone.

建议: 回答较简短且有语法错误，建议扩展理由并使用正确的词汇和句子结构，使表达更清晰具体。

示例: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it adds too much pressure or stress during work or study.

建议: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和重复，建议简化句子，注意动词时态和单复数形式，提升表达流畅度。

示例: I usually prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can distract me with social media or apps like TikTok. Paper helps me stay focused.

× Well, no, actually I will not make a list when I was doing shopping because I believe shopping for me is the is a kind of relaxing.

✓ Well, no, actually I did not make a list when I was shopping because I believe shopping for me is a kind of relaxing.

这里时态不一致，描述过去的行为时应使用过去时态。将“will not make”改为“did not make”符合过去时态的要求。

× because I believe shopping for me is the is a kind of relaxing.

✓ because I believe shopping for me is a kind of relaxing.

“the is a kind of relaxing”中“the”多余且错误，应去掉。

× I just walk around in the supermarket and pick whatever things I want.

✓ I just walk around the supermarket and pick whatever things I want.

“walk around in the supermarket”中“in”多余，正确表达是“walk around the supermarket”。

× I don't want to make it become a mission for me.

✓ I don't want to make it a mission for me.

“make it become”结构不自然，英语中通常用“make it + 名词”表达使某物成为某物。

× Yeah, definitely. I believe making a list when you working your study can help either way, helping you to do these things more efficiently, OK,

✓ Yeah, definitely. I believe making a list when you are working or studying can help either way, helping you to do these things more efficiently, OK,

“when you working your study”缺少助动词且“study”应为动名词形式，正确为“when you are working or studying”。

× I believe making a list when you working your study can help either way, helping you to do these things more efficiently, OK, because you know what exactly you need to do at those moments and you will not rest for too long, OK, You you will not waste your time on your phones or just.

✓ I believe making a list when you are working or studying can help either way, helping you to do these things more efficiently, OK, because you know exactly what you need to do at those moments and you will not rest for too long, OK, you will not waste your time on your phone or just.

“waste your time on your phones”中“phones”应为单数“phone”，且“know what exactly”语序错误，应为“know exactly what”。

× Well, I guess maybe they will feel too much pressure if they make a lift when they're working or study it.

✓ Well, I guess maybe they will feel too much pressure if they make a list when they're working or studying.

“make a lift”应为“make a list”，“study it”中“it”多余，应去掉。

× If I want to make a list, I most of the time I will make it on the paper because if I made it on my phone, maybe I will waste off my time on my phone like checking the message on social media or just playing the Tiktok, this kind of things.

✓ If I want to make a list, most of the time I will make it on paper because if I make it on my phone, maybe I will waste my time on my phone like checking messages on social media or just playing TikTok, these kinds of things.

“waste off my time”错误，应为“waste my time”；“on the paper”应为“on paper”；“checking the message”应为“checking messages”；“the Tiktok”应为“TikTok”；“this kind of things”应为“these kinds of things”。

× But on the paper, I will not do those kind of thing.

✓ But on paper, I will not do those kinds of things.

“on the paper”应为“on paper”；“those kind of thing”应为“those kinds of things”，保持数的一致。