列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas, namun Anda bisa membuatnya lebih alami dan efektif dengan menghindari pengulangan kata seperti 'I want to' dan 'all of the stuff'. Cobalah untuk menggunakan kalimat yang lebih ringkas dan alami.

示例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need to buy.

建议: Perhatikan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang tepat, misalnya 'a to-do list' dan 'it completely works for me'. Selain itu, gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan singkat untuk menjawab pertanyaan secara langsung.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my tasks every day, and it works well because it helps me stay organized.

建议: Perbaiki tata bahasa, seperti penggunaan 'makes' bukan 'make' untuk subjek tunggal. Selain itu, gunakan kata-kata yang lebih tepat dan kalimat yang lebih alami untuk menjelaskan alasan secara spesifik.

示例: I think some people dislike making lists because it reminds them of having too much work, which makes them feel stressed.

建议: Jawaban Anda agak tidak lengkap dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa seperti 'keep remind me' dan kalimat yang terputus. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas dengan menggunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide Anda.

示例: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the feeling of crossing off items, but I also keep a digital copy on my phone for convenience.

× Of course, I always make A to do list for my test every day and it's completely work on me because it helps me to stay organized.

✓ Of course, I always make a to-do list for my test every day and it completely works for me because it helps me to stay organized.

The modal verb 'it's completely work on me' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it completely works for me' because 'work' here is a verb that needs to agree with the singular subject 'it' and requires the preposition 'for'. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.

× I think it's because they hate the feeling that they have a bunch of work to do and it make them feel so stressful.

✓ I think it's because they hate the feeling that they have a bunch of work to do and it makes them feel so stressed.

The verb 'make' does not agree with the singular subject 'it'; it should be 'makes'. Also, 'feel so stressful' is incorrect because 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, not the feeling itself. The correct adjective is 'stressed' to describe how they feel.

× I love to make a list on paper, but I also love to duplicate them in the digital way to keep remind me of the list.

✓ I love to make a list on paper, but I also love to duplicate them digitally to keep reminding me of the list.

The phrase 'in the digital way' is awkward and incorrect; 'digitally' is the correct adverb. Also, 'to keep remind me' is incorrect; it should be 'to keep reminding me' because 'keep' is followed by the verb in the -ing form.

× But I prefer on the paper because I love the feels of taking off the.

✓ But I prefer paper because I love the feeling of crossing items off the list.

The phrase 'prefer on the paper' is incorrect; 'prefer paper' is correct. 'Feels' should be 'feeling' as a noun. 'Taking off the' is incomplete; the correct phrase is 'crossing items off the list' to express removing items from a list.