列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构较为混乱，且有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

示例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I'm not good at planning. However, I know that making a list can help me remember what to buy.

建议: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多，且缺少连接词使句子显得断裂。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法正确。

示例: Sometimes I make a list at work because it helps me remember my tasks, which is very important.

建议: 回答中有重复和不确定表达，语法错误明显，且缺少具体细节。建议避免重复，使用更确定的表达，并提供具体原因。

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient or they prefer to be spontaneous rather than plan ahead.

建议: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子，表达不够清晰。建议注意时态一致，句子完整，并使用更自然的表达。

示例: When I was young, I usually made lists on paper because I didn't have a phone. But now, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient.

× I don't like to make a list when I go to shopping because I'm not a person that good at planning things or make a list.

✓ I don't like to make a list when I go shopping because I'm not a person who is good at planning things or making a list.

这里'shop'前不需要介词'to'，应该直接用'go shopping'。另外，'person that good'缺少动词，应该是'person who is good'。'make a list'应改为动名词形式'making a list'，因为前面用的是'or'连接两个动名词短语。

× But I think make a list can remind me to what What can I buy or what should I buy.

✓ But I think making a list can remind me what I can buy or what I should buy.

动词'make'应改为动名词形式'making'，因为它作为主语使用。'remind me to what'结构不正确，应该是'remind me what'。

× Usually sometimes I will make a list when I'm working because I think make a list can help me or remind me what should I do or what things I need to do.

✓ Usually, sometimes I will make a list when I'm working because I think making a list can help me or remind me what I should do or what things I need to do.

同样，'make a list'应改为动名词形式'making a list'，因为它作为主语使用。

× I don't know, but in my own opinion, I think, I think the people may think it's very inconvenient and or they don't like to planning things, whatever.

✓ I don't know, but in my opinion, I think people may think it's very inconvenient or they don't like planning things, whatever.

短语'in my own opinion'通常说成'in my opinion'。'like to planning'结构错误，'like'后面应接动名词'planning'，而不是不定式加动名词。

× When I was small I usually make a list on the paper because I don't have a.

✓ When I was small, I usually made a list on paper because I didn't have one.

'When I was small'表示过去，动词应使用过去时'made'。'on the paper'应为'on paper'，因为这里泛指纸张。'I don't have a.'不完整，应补充为'I didn't have one.'表示没有手机。

× But in nowadays I grow up, I usually make a list on my phone because I think it's more con convenient and yeah.

✓ But nowadays I have grown up, I usually make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient, yeah.

'in nowadays'错误，正确用法是'normally'或直接用'nowadays'。'I grow up'应使用现在完成时'have grown up'表示已经长大。单词'con convenient'拼写错误，应为'convenient'。