列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use past or present tense consistently and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me find everything I need quickly. This way, I can save time and avoid forgetting important items.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains mistakes that affect understanding. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid vague expressions like 'I don't know' and explain your habits clearly.

示例: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I prefer to work spontaneously. I find that planning too much can sometimes limit my creativity.

建议: Your answer has some good ideas but is confusing and incomplete. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, use linking words, and complete your sentences. Avoid informal or uncertain phrases like 'maybe are they just lazy?'.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because it takes time, and they feel it slows them down. Also, some might find it boring or prefer to remember tasks naturally.

建议: Your answer is understandable but has grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and complete your sentences. Also, explain why using your phone is helpful with clear reasons.

示例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. This way, I don't lose my list, and I can easily add or remove items whenever I want.

× So I make a list before I went to shopping and I just go there and buy what I wanted and it's, uh, reduce my time.

✓ So I make a list before I go shopping and I just go there and buy what I want and it reduces my time.

The sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly. 'Went' should be 'go' to match the present tense context, 'wanted' should be 'want', and 'reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Use consistent present tense to describe habitual actions.

× I'm not actually that kind of person to make a release for my book.

✓ I'm not actually that kind of person to make a list for my book.

The word 'release' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but since it affects meaning, it is corrected to 'list'.

× I usually book on natural.

✓ I usually book naturally.

The phrase 'book on natural' is incorrect. The adverb 'naturally' should be used to modify the verb 'book'. This corrects the preposition misuse and word form.

× Except instead of making lists, maybe are they just lazy?

✓ Except instead of making lists, maybe they are just lazy?

The word order is incorrect for a statement. The correct order is 'maybe they are' instead of 'maybe are they'. This corrects the pronoun and verb placement for proper sentence structure.

× So am I, but making a list it's kind of.

✓ So am I, but making a list is kind of helpful.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb phrase. Adding 'is kind of helpful' completes the thought and corrects the pronoun and verb usage.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more handy and it's always with me and it's hard to lost it because I protect my phone just as my life.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more handy and it's always with me and it's hard to lose it because I protect my phone as if it were my life.

The phrase 'hard to lost it' is incorrect; 'lost' should be 'lose' as the base form after 'to'. Also, 'just as my life' is better expressed as 'as if it were my life' for clarity and correctness.

× So it's always been me and. It helps nature too.

✓ So it's always with me and it helps me too.

The phrase 'it's always been me and' is incomplete and incorrect. Changing to 'it's always with me' corrects the pronoun usage. 'It helps nature too' is likely a misstatement; 'it helps me too' fits the context better.