列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like "Easier so" and "if I go to South". Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

示例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a recipe without forgetting anything.

建议: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence and explain how making lists helps you at work with specific examples. Avoid vague or confusing phrases like "if I go to the world" and incomplete sentences.

示例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organise my tasks. For instance, when I have a busy day, the list ensures I don't forget important duties.

建议: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like "make leaves" and "personal faces". Try to give a clear opinion with reasons why some people dislike making lists, using simple and correct language.

示例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. For example, some friends of mine feel lists limit their flexibility.

建议: Your answer is generally clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me. This way, I don't need to carry extra paper and can easily update my list anytime.

× it makes my decision quite easier

✓ it makes my decision quite easy

The adjective 'easy' should be used here instead of the adverb 'easier' because it describes the noun 'decision'. 'Easier' is a comparative form and requires a comparison object, which is missing here.

× before I go to shop

✓ before I go shopping

The verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form of the verb to indicate the activity. 'Go shopping' is the correct phrase, not 'go to shop'.

× if I go to South

✓ if I go south

When referring to directions, 'south' is used without the preposition 'to'. 'Go south' is correct.

× before I started working

✓ before I start working

The sentence refers to a habitual action in the present, so the present tense 'start' should be used instead of the past tense 'started'.

× if I go to the world

✓ if I go to the world

This sentence is unclear and likely incorrect. Possibly the intended phrase is 'if I go to the world' meaning 'if I travel the world', but it needs clarification. However, since 'go to the world' is not a common phrase, it might be better to say 'if I go around the world' or 'if I travel the world'.

× I have to be a all the things before

✓ I have to be aware of all the things before

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'aware of' clarifies the meaning, making the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× people don't like to make leaves

✓ people don't like to make lists

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects sentence clarity.

× everyone has their personal faces

✓ everyone has their personal preferences

The phrase 'personal faces' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'personal preferences'. This is a vocabulary error affecting meaning.

× Some of them have habit to make a list

✓ Some of them have a habit of making a list

The correct phrase is 'have a habit of' followed by the gerund form of the verb. 'Have habit to make' is incorrect.

× I have already told mine

✓ I have already told you mine

The sentence lacks the object pronoun 'you' to indicate to whom the information was told.

× Say it is an era of mobile phones and computers

✓ I say it is the era of mobile phones and computers

The phrase should include the subject 'I' and use the definite article 'the' before 'era' to specify the current era.

× I love to make a list in my phone rather than a paper

✓ I love to make a list on my phone rather than on paper

The correct preposition for devices like phones is 'on', and 'paper' does not need an article here.

× Because if I have my own phone, there is no need to take a piece of paper to look at the list

✓ Because if I have my own phone, there is no need to take a piece of paper to look at the list

This sentence is grammatically correct but incomplete as a standalone sentence. It is better connected to the previous sentence for clarity.