列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答表达了观点，但句子结构较为混乱，且有重复表达。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

示例: No, I usually shop spontaneously at the supermarket because I find making a list before shopping complicated and unnecessary.

建议: 回答中有些语法错误和表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并用连接词连接观点和理由。

示例: Yes, I do. When I was in high school, I often made lists for my homework, and I found them very useful because they helped me organize my tasks clearly.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连接词使观点更清晰。

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and unnecessary, just like I feel when I go shopping.

建议: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，使用连接词，并注意语法准确性。

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it all the time, and typing is faster than writing on paper.

× Actually no, because I often go shopping in the supermarket and buy some things spontaneously and I think when I saw it and I think to make a list before shopping it is complex and not useful.

✓ Actually no, because I often go shopping in the supermarket and buy some things spontaneously and I think when I see it and I think making a list before shopping is complex and not useful.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示经常发生的事情，所以不能用过去时的'saw'，应该用现在时的'see'。另外，'to make a list before shopping it is complex'结构不正确，应该用动名词'making a list before shopping'作为主语。

× Yeah, of course. My work is a student and when I was at high school I often made a list for my homework and I found that it's very useful to make list and it is, it can solve very clearly through the list.

✓ Yeah, of course. My work is a student and when I was at high school I often made a list for my homework and I found that it's very useful to make a list and it can solve problems very clearly through the list.

这里缺少冠词'a'，'make list'应为'make a list'。另外，'it is, it can solve very clearly through the list'表达不完整，补充为'it can solve problems very clearly through the list'更通顺。

× Well, I think some people don't like making this because they think it is complex and not useful. Because for me when I go shopping or doing some other things make a list, I think it is it is not needed.

✓ Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they think it is complex and not useful. For me, when I go shopping or do some other things, making a list is not needed.

'making this'不明确，应改为'making lists'。'when I go shopping or doing some other things make a list'结构混乱，应改为'when I go shopping or do some other things, making a list is not needed'。

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always I almost use my phone every single time and every day. And also I think make a list on my phone and when I'm typing I type fast that then I write.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I almost always use my phone every single time and every day. Also, I think making a list on my phone is better because when I'm typing, I type faster than when I write.

'I always I almost use'重复且语序错误，应改为'I almost always use'。'I think make a list'应为动名词结构'making a list'。'I type fast that then I write'表达不清，应改为'I type faster than when I write'。