列表— Part 1 评分报告
对话
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Usually when I just buy my clothes or accessories I don't make a list, but when I try to buy some groceries for cook menu I try to make a list because if I don't make a list I often forget.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Usually when I work I don't make a list, but I just schedule until when it should be done. I just make a timeline, not a list. But when I study I make a list what to do and I just follow it. It really works.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Because making lists itself is time consuming, many people like to postpone their work until the deadline. But making lists are kind of planning job and many people doesn't like.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I make I prefer to make a list on my phone because every day and every time I bring my phone a list. Uh, the purpose to make list is to check out when I finish the task.
评估
总分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分数: 75.0建议: 답변이 자연스럽고 내용이 명확하지만, 문장이 다소 길고 연결어 사용이 부족합니다. 문장을 간결하게 하고, 'because' 대신 'so'나 'therefore' 같은 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 강화하세요.
示例: I usually don't make a list when buying clothes or accessories. However, when I shop for groceries to cook, I make a list because I often forget items otherwise.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分数: 70.0建议: 답변이 직접적이지만 문장 구조가 반복적이고 연결어가 부족합니다. 'However'나 'instead' 같은 연결어를 사용해 문장 간 관계를 명확히 하고, 문장을 더 간결하게 만드세요.
示例: I usually don't make a list for work; instead, I create a timeline with deadlines. However, when I study, I make a to-do list and follow it, which works well.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分数: 65.0建议: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 주어-동사 일치에 주의하고, 문장을 더 자연스럽게 다듬으세요. 또한, 'because' 대신 'since'나 'as'를 사용해 다양성을 높이세요.
示例: Some people dislike making lists since it takes time. Also, many prefer to postpone tasks until the deadline rather than planning ahead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分数: 60.0建议: 중복된 표현과 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 수정하고, 'because' 뒤에 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하세요.
示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can easily check off tasks when I finish them.
语法
× Because making lists itself is time consuming, many people like to postpone their work until the deadline.
✓ Because making lists itself is time-consuming, many people like to postpone their work until the deadline.
The phrase 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as a compound adjective before a noun or pronoun. This clarifies that it is a single descriptive term.
× But making lists are kind of planning job and many people doesn't like.
✓ But making lists is a kind of planning job and many people don't like it.
The subject 'making lists' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'many people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Additionally, 'planning job' needs an article 'a' before it, and 'like' should be followed by 'it' to complete the meaning.
× I make I prefer to make a list on my phone because every day and every time I bring my phone a list.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I bring my phone every day and every time.
The original sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I make I'). Also, 'bring my phone a list' is incorrect; the list is on the phone, so it should be 'I bring my phone every day and every time.' The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.
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