列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow. Also, correct minor grammar errors such as 'stop me to buying' to 'stop me from buying'.

示例: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time. Moreover, it prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建议: Your response addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks clarity. Use correct verb forms and clearer linking words. Also, avoid filler words like 'Uh'.

示例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks for the next day before going to bed. This helps me work efficiently and saves time.

建议: Your answer is understandable but contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they have good memories and prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

建议: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammar errors and awkward phrasing. Use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence with linking words.

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to save and carry them. In contrast, paper lists can be difficult to keep safe and I might lose them.

× Yes, I frequently make a list before I go to shop because it will help me to remind the things that I would like to buy and it saves time and it will stop me to buying unnecessary things.

✓ Yes, I frequently make a list before I go shopping because it helps me remember the things that I would like to buy, saves time, and stops me from buying unnecessary things.

The phrase 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' because 'go' is followed by a verb in the -ing form to indicate the activity. Also, 'help me to remind' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me remember' as 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'to' in this context. Additionally, 'stop me to buying' is incorrect; the correct form is 'stop me from buying' because 'stop' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb.

× Yes, I daily create an inventory for tomorrow's work before I going to bed. Uh, I think it is easy to work properly on the same time and it saves time.

✓ Yes, I daily create an inventory for tomorrow's work before I go to bed. Uh, I think it is easy to work properly at the same time and it saves time.

The phrase 'before I going to bed' is incorrect; it should be 'before I go to bed' because after 'before' we use the base form of the verb with the subject. Also, 'on the same time' should be 'at the same time' as the correct preposition for time expressions is 'at'.

× Some people don't like to making list because I think they have good memory to memorize everything. Also they would like to do anything without any making plan.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because I think they have a good memory to memorize everything. Also, they would like to do anything without making any plan.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to', so 'don't like to making' should be 'don't like making'. 'List' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'Any making plan' is incorrect; it should be 'making any plan' because 'making' is a gerund and 'any' modifies 'plan'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it would easy to save and bring it with me compared to paper because the paper is hectic to protect them like I think I would lost them.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easy to save and bring with me compared to paper, which is difficult to protect; I think I would lose them.

The phrase 'would easy' is incorrect; it should be 'is easy' to correctly use the adjective. 'Hectic' is not appropriate here; 'difficult' or 'hard' is better to describe protecting paper. 'I would lost them' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I would lose them' because 'would' is followed by the base verb.