列表— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In English (Bhutan), try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct phrases like 'not time consumer' to 'not time-consuming'.

示例: I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember all the items and saves time by avoiding extra trips.

建议: In English (Bhutan), respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence. Use correct grammar and linking words to clarify your points. Avoid vague phrases and be specific about your work and how lists help you.

示例: I make lists at work when I have many payments to process as an accountant. This helps me complete all tasks on the same day efficiently.

建议: In English (Bhutan), avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Make your answer clear and logical by using linking words and correct vocabulary. Also, correct 'listening to things' to 'making lists' and avoid repetition.

示例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to focus on other important tasks instead.

建议: In English (Bhutan), avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and correct grammar mistakes. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because paper lists can be easily lost.'

示例: I prefer making lists on my phone because smartphones are convenient and paper lists can be easily lost.

× If there is so many payments to be done, then I have to do it on the same day.

✓ If there are so many payments to be done, then I have to do them on the same day.

The error is due to incorrect verb form and subject-verb agreement. 'Is' should be 'are' because 'payments' is plural. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to the plural noun 'payments'. To improve, ensure the verb agrees with the plural subject and pronouns match the noun number.

× If there is so many payments to be done, then I have to do it on the same day.

✓ If there are so many payments to be done, then I have to do them on the same day.

The phrase 'so many payments' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, the pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'payments'. To improve, always match verbs and pronouns with the number of the subject.

× So making a list makes it effective and efficient and not time consumer.

✓ So making a list makes it effective and efficient and not time-consuming.

The phrase 'time consumer' is incorrect; the correct adjective form is 'time-consuming'. This is a compound adjective describing something that takes a lot of time. To improve, use correct adjective forms and compound adjectives when describing nouns.

× I don't have to go again to the store and waste my time.

✓ I don't have to go to the store again and waste my time.

The adverb 'again' should be placed after the verb phrase 'go to the store' for natural English word order. To improve, place adverbs like 'again' close to the verb they modify.

× For me, while I go to work, it depends on what kind of work you have.

✓ For me, while I go to work, it depends on what kind of work I have.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used when referring to oneself. It should be 'I' to maintain consistency in the first person. To improve, ensure pronouns match the subject's perspective.

× So it depends on the number of payments that has came from the chief executive officers.

✓ So it depends on the number of payments that have come from the chief executive officers.

The verb phrase 'has came' is incorrect. The correct past participle is 'have come' to agree with the plural subject 'payments'. To improve, use correct past participle forms and match verb number with the subject.

× So it depends on the number of payments that has came from the chief executive officers.

✓ So it depends on the number of payments that have come from the chief executive officers.

The subject 'payments' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. Also, 'came' is the simple past tense; the past participle 'come' is needed here. To improve, use correct verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× If there is so many payments to be done, then I have to do it on the same day.

✓ If there are so many payments to be done, then I have to do them on the same day.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'payments'. It should be 'them'. Also, 'is' should be 'are' for plural subject. To improve, ensure pronouns and verbs agree in number with their antecedents.

× I personally think, uh, some of the people don't like listening to things because umm, it's time consuming and they have other other priority works to be done.

✓ I personally think, uh, some people don't like listening to things because, umm, it's time-consuming and they have other priority work to be done.

The phrase 'other other priority works' is incorrect. 'Work' is an uncountable noun and does not take 's'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. To improve, use uncountable nouns correctly and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× So some of the some people like.

✓ So some people like it.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' completes the thought. Also, 'some of the some people' is redundant; 'some people' suffices. To improve, avoid redundancy and complete sentences with necessary objects.

× Uh, now it's 21st centuries and smartphones are with every human being or an individual.

✓ Uh, now it's the 21st century and smartphones are with every human being or individual.

The phrase '21st centuries' should be singular '21st century' with the definite article 'the'. Also, 'or an individual' is redundant after 'every human being'. To improve, use correct singular/plural forms and avoid redundancy.

× So for me, I like making a list on a mobile phone because paper based is I can lose it when I can lose it very easily and if I write it.

✓ So for me, I like making a list on a mobile phone because paper-based lists can be lost very easily if I write them.

The phrase 'paper based is I can lose it when I can lose it' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Paper-based' should be hyphenated and followed by a noun like 'lists'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'lists'. To improve, use clear sentence structure and correct hyphenation.